Amongst creatures in the Three Realms, I am the Asura. Fighting against the Heaven and the Earth, I am an Immortal! A loser, instructed by Asura Technique accidentally, has embarked on a road of shaking the universe.
This book has a very unique plot. At first the title made me grin, not knowing what to expect, but the idea is really cool. The scenes are nicely built and the author posesses a broad vocabulary and a lot of imagination.Keep up the good work! :)
Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didn’t even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didn’t mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.
This novel is very very good... aside from the first 5 chapters. it states that the mc did some messed up things, like cucking his brother, but were never given any description of it and its only briefly mentioned in one sentence. If you can get through the first 5 chapters, this book is definitely worth the read.
For anyone who wishes to read this novel, IT IS NOT IN ENGLISH. I'm not sure why the synopsis is but the book itself is not. I hope the author can translate this to English or find someone who can help them do this
This sounds alright has anyone got the raws for this novel ..................................???????????????????????ggghhhhhhbnjgggh God dam the 150 character rule
