i liked the start of the story really unique and well written it got my attention.....as for the system its really well planned out which is really good.
it's an amazing work of art.
He gives in way to much he like a dog his sister told him she wanted to put him on a leash and convince himself that it for a good reason he is weak minded he needs to be a man change that and he would be perfect
Stolen from Royal Road this is one of the reasons I have left this app the author has tried to have it removed. Stolen from Royal Road this is one of the reasons I have left this app the author has tried to have it removed.
Come! Come!! Come!!! Yes, you reading this review. I have found a good story. I will hang around to enjoy myself. I got my hot cup of tea ready too.
This book starts a bit slow, it is more slice of life with a system. It soon gets better and better. my only problem is not the book but with WN, will they EVER release this from this relegation??? it has 4 times the votes it needs to go on it's been on trial for MONTHS, yet being the top for months on end it still hasn't been released.
Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all. If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.
this is so irritating with what he writes about
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after reading 60 chapters
writing quality: author is definitely newbie.skipping most of interesting part like picking loot after fight.after a fight system will pick one or two basic attributes and there is also a ding in Last sentence , we think there is a big loot in next chapter but when reading next chapter we feel like it was some other novel bcoz the story move forward few months.
story: transmigrates to a orphan , getting system,joining royal academy, problem with noble silk pants..bla...bla..
there is no concept about system like what triggers attributes pickup.we only know he get everything when he wanted
eg: he first get magic spell. he can't use it because no magic. after few paragraphs (not chapters) he get magic attributes drop.
he get meditation skill he has no talent..after few para..he picked up superior talent.
he get red dragon aura technique ..don't have red dragon blood line to practice it.. after few paragraphs he get high quality red dragon blood line.
he can get every drop just walking near people..no need to fight / need time. just like that.
conclusion: for a light read it's more than good. even it's break our commonsense sometimes.if it's selected I still mostly read it until it breaks my brain completely.
It's okay. I've read a lot of game/system novels and they might not all be good, but I enjoy powering through them. This book is okay, not great...but okay. Personally, it just seems a bit boring to read for a novel that is a system/game/whatever genre. Paragraphs seems too wordy/flowery when it comes to the different scenes and can be overly descriptive, with extra info dumps thrown in.
Others might enjoy the novel and you need to read it to make your own judgement, but to me, the story flow is boring.
This book has all the bad things and cliche things but these things defy your expectations. Like Kono suba anime
It's fucking awesome.