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I love this
I don't like the writing style, the mc is dumb but does things that are said to be hard for pro players using plot armour, no information about how levels and attack/damage work, the author just uses it according to his need.
Well, I don't have much to say so I'll just inform any readers that stumble upon my comment of the following words: I'd like to tell you all that this story has such a huge amount of potential and that I hope that the author stays consistent and doesn't drop this story, anyways, that's all.
this is the first time i would read a Nigeria action story and it seems cool to me. But author pls you need to work on the mis pronunciation of words. aside that, great work
Creation, oh my ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. The plotline is exciting, intriguing and most of all interesting. The Ml's character is a unique one and that's makes it all the more interesting keep it up, author!
I really have to say this novel hooked me in. I can’t wait to see the new updates
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i very glad that I could read this great novel thank you. I wish you will continue uploading new chapters
The story is terrible. I bought 20 chapters and it doesn't improve. The main character still goes to college, lives in a lousy apartment, and lets people walk all over him.
He wastes money on a pointless party to gain popularity.
The story is full of cliches and the forced marriage plot made me lose interest.
(I didnt get far enough to see if the marriage actually happens but he has to marry some girl or else he looses his money)
The main character is overly sexualized and easily aroused. He lets disrespectful people off the hook too easily. Overall, the story is frustrating and annoying.
Writing Quality ★
• It's a complete copy of a copy of a copy of a copy of a slight original of an original novel with the same plot. Just a pervert well not exactly a pervert but you get my point of him only looking for female disciples with the synopsis alone.
Story Development ★
• It's just the same story with completely different name of some novels with disciple cashback/return system.
Character Design ★
• I already mentioned it, a copy of a copy of a....
Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
• No complain here
World Background ★
• Just an expanding set of world starting from the MC's sect to the other region, to a continent, to another world, etc...
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Decent novel, but it just feels emotionless. Like it's got the op mc, decent use of his cheat, etc, but he's emotionless and his surroundings are emotionless. It just seems like there's no point to him powering up. Dropped on ch86
