....So what's with the cat?? Lol~~
I think I might like this. Well it sounds interesting at least!
It’s sad to say but it’s basically a dinosaur themed first order. There is some difference that I think it could be it’s own novel but the horrible time looping, jumps, and weird conversations take away from the novel. A good editor could fix this novel but I don’t recommend this for picking in its current state.
this is a very interesting book to read......I just love how the story flows smoothly while also making sure that one enjoys themselves while reading it.
Good work.
mc is an idiot and have many plotholes......................................................................................................
The shameless author here. Landing a review here because as of now, Volume 1 of this book has been completed. It shall be continued soon. Thank you for your support people.
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I am for this novel, read the complete mtl, it's really fun to read. I become invincible after staying home for a hundred years, you can find it on NovelMTL
From the first page, I was pulled in. Although slightly cliche with the dream sequence, it does a wonderful job of setting up the plot and made me question what would happen next. We as readers get a good idea that Dax may be more than what meets the eye. Another thing I liked in particular was how the author was able to describe things. The details are nicely done and adds a basic foundation to the characters and the world. The world building also seems interesting, I liked the concept of the nanites and the advanced world that Dax lives in. Dax and Fay also hit it off pretty well, so I'm curious to see if that's a possible shipping route, lol. The first few chapters are a slow build up, but there is lots of foreshadowing that tells you to just hang on for the ride. With that being said, there were some grammatical errors and sometimes the character interactions fall flat, but other than that, this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to reading more chapters from this awesome author. Keep up the good work, Choas! :)
Advice "At least be selfish for your own sake, if it's advantageous for the sake of strength then do "beneficial" things like fawning over the young master/princess. if it's just an ordinary person do you want to be "robinhood" come on be selfish for yourself. good but if you do it many times it might look "disgusting".
Honestly, this is my favorite one out of all of the rest.Hope it gets picked ?... ...