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The quality of the writing is well done. You get what it means most of the time. The Stability of the chapters is what seems like at least one chapter week, it depends on the author's mood I presume, or his workplace. The Story Development is good and there is folklore within it. It is interesting to see some lore, you know? The Character Design I would say is the best thing so far. The reason why that is is that it gives you good and exact details on the character or his/her face. You can actually imagine her/his facial expressions! Moving on to World Background. It is pretty good, it ain't bad, nor good, its a-ok. It doesn't give TO much info nor to vague, just perfect, like the movies in a sense.
I love the characters. I'm currently reading it and I'm so hooked! I'm really getting curious about it. I love how it flows. Can't wait to reaD more. Job well done.
The best review I have ever seen so had to paste it here XD
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Jiang He walks into a Walmart. The managers all greet him respectfully at the entrance, terrified.
"Lord Jiang He, what may we do for you?"
"I'm here for compensation." Jiang He pointed to an employee, who has turned white in the face. "All I did was kill his wife and kidnap her sons. Yet she was spying on me and even had killing intent toward me. How dare he? I can't sleep at night because of him, scared that he might murder me at night."
"Sir, please have mercy. He is just..." A manager was pleading.
Jiang He harrumphed, and a sword Qi at 20 times the speed of sound instantly penetrated that manager's head.
"Hmmpt! I'm just here to ask for a little compensation. I simply want him dead, and 50 of your stores as compensation for mental stress!" Jiang He felt ridiculous. All he wanted was a bit of compensation. How dare these people be so arrogant.
The Walmart could do nothing but agree to his demands. They killed the employee on the spot, and gave Jiang he his rightful compensation.
Damn, Jiang He thought. I was hoping they'd argue a bit more. Then I could have asked for more compensation.
Jiang He was annoyed as he left the store. Where will he get the 200 spirit meat he wants now?
Hmm. That employee has a father who is a big shot in Cosco. He is definitely going to kill me if I don't kill him. I guess I will have to pay a visit to Cosco and destroy that franchise! Hmmpt. How dare he think about killing me. Does he think I'm easy to bully?
Another Evil Wuxia type novel.
It is the same kind of novel where
Mc will fight continously and the world background is completely ignored.
Nothing new but I got the same feeling as Reverend Insanity.
Awesome story.. great characters but I want to see more of the protagonist.. I am quite not sure who it is but I am intrigue to see who could be this mysterious protagonist... Keep it up
Can I review the author? He's always trying to improve his story.
I know lately, he has been rewriting some chapters to make it even better!
Keep the awesome work! You'll reach the top eventually!
Oh yeah. Good story too ^_^
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When I saw the title, I usually ignore those novels but I gave it a try.
I have read the first 2 chapters so far and it actually sounds promising.
It's a kinda different storyline and I feel a bit connected to the main character
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Hey there!
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I don't think I've given another book 5 stars yet, but this gets it. The story is a gritty and very real depiction of what it's like to be at the bottom with a desire to escape.
The first arc hit hard. Like really hard. It's obviously a made up story, but the emotions in it feel raw and visceral.
I wouldn't change anything about this novel. There's no need to change the writing at all, because perfection is not necessary here. If anything, any writing issues just give the novel more character.
Truly a fantastic novel, and I will be following it from now on. Well done to the author.