This an amazIng book so far and im hoping its not dropp because it Just that good to me only problem is the mc wAnting build a sect or palace to me it just waste Of time findIng people to manage and Certian people you can just like me im all about my Women and kids thats it I would nake us sk strIng ThaT the whole woRld would not be able to stop a single swip from my hand♎️??
looks like a really interesting book. have not started to read yet but is very eager to do!!!...The storyline seems excellently designed and I hope I love it
A story I could binge for if author would be so kind as to post more. Our mc is a devil on the outside but an angel on the inside, yet she isn’t naively innocent to the point it is annoying. She has her own character that bursts out of the screen and the intellect to carry her through danger. Everything is nigh perfect except for a repeating grammar issue. Grammar errors are in everyone’s books, but I’ve noticed you replaced commas or periods with ellipses in dialogues and sometimes in paragraphs, which is not so good in the long run. Would suggest to correct at least some since it does bother me a bit.All in all, splendid potential that makes me crave for more. Keep up the good work, Author !