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Starting chapters look good. The idea of the story is from the card game anime which makes it interesting. Overall, it's a good start. I will continue to read to see how the story will turn.
Okay. I like the story so far. Honestly there’s nothing bad I can say about the story so far. I personally enjoy stories that take place within VR or deep-dive games. The grammar is good. It’s early so I can’t say too much about plot.Overall I rate the novel a 5 stars.
Attractive and fun story !! I like and am excited every time there's a battle and another thing that many novels lack is this story can have all the flavors whether it is sad, exhilarating, or even funny, etc. This book is very good, so I wanna share it with everyone and give lots of support to the author.
I have been serching for a novel like this one, where everyone is transmigate to another wolrd and became lords, without counting that stupid translated novel that same times apper. And the book is very well write, the caracter desing and the world background is also good and the development of the story is very good compering whith thous stupid chinese novels. I belive that this novel as great potential to even go against the novel about the desort lord that has been on the leader bords for same time.
The MC worked as a security guard, probably for drug dealers to make enough money for college. As he spends all his time securing deliveries, probably opium, he can't take the course himself so he sends his girlfriend to take the course. After he was betrayed, he put four shots in both and before being arrested mysteriously went back in time. Watch this new story where the mc knowing the future, takes the money from college, buys a rifle, robs his old bosses and makes his first billion, not even screwing this crazy man invested the money for a graduation and became a billionaire. I can't wait until the part where he converts everything to bitcoin and moves to Russia.
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This book is bad and I mean bad I thought it would be good and not much is written about healers but no this story was a trash story.
I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it.1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'.It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx.Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters.Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means.2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former.Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level?For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one.3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints.4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him.5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them.I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".
It's surprisingly good, for me at least (I love face smaking type of novel).
Warning : The rest of the review contains a bit of math.
While reading some of the reviews and comment I noticed people saying that it would take 5 years to translate 4k chapters.
So here's the math, unless the translation pace changed.
If the translator was translating a chapter a day, he would need (4000 / 365,5 =) approx. 11 years.
Unfortunately he's translating 5 chapters a week.
There are 52 weeks in a year, so 5×52 =260 chapters in a year.
4000/260 = approx. 15 years and a few months.
I can't remember why I wrote this, so I'll just cut it short :
For the translator : Thanks for translating this novel, I hope you'll do great and good luck on those coming years.
For the people reading this review : I've still got no idea why I was writing all this...
I never stopped reading from start to finish! Chapter 1-60, I enjoyed every single one! I hope that this novel is picked and continued instead of the other copy and paste novels that fill this site!
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