1 this might just be me being nit picky , but whatever the main character is using is not nen.Nen has restrictions on the user that allows the ability to be more powerful, take for example kuropika; can only use certain chains on the spiders or else he will die. By allowing the mc 100% talent at all types of nen you have practically ignored a key opportunity to define the mc. Because to me as of 10 chapters in the mc has no defining characteristics ,a jack of all trades does not always =god like, in this case it's just means there exist a character who can do what ever he wants withought the needs for justification.If you have read or seen HxH nen qualities is built off a characters personality(which cheredoe lacks) , and I concede to fact that this a hack system novel, however it still has to be logical. 2 This novel feels seriously jumpy, the mc just happens to meet several main characters if atg for seemly no reason withought hardly no space between each chapter. 3 I apologize to the author if this is found offensive, however I simply trying to give a honest and hopefully insightful review that might be of some use.
Author when are you gonna update this novel? ._.a or is this novel dropped?
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Honestly, I don't often read overpowered characters. But, I like this story. I like smart characters. I'm really looking forward to the development of the main character.
The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author
Really good story, a little disappointed i cant read volume 5 righit now but i think the rewrite will be worth the wait. honestly one of the best things on here, the author knows how to write a cultivation novel. please just trust me, for your own good.
thought this book was dropped but thankfully the author still has plans.. looking forward more more!
I actually bypassed this before as I thought it will be a book where people simply try to survive a zombie apocalypse. Having had the chance to read it now made me realize that this actually is a gem. I was surprised when the author used terms from our local dialect. It is refreshing! I can also relate to the humor the author used as these are common in our country (sabihin mo salamat shafefe
this got high ratings so i tried it. pretty good concept, but why do you have info dumps in every chapter? first 12 chapters and what do we got? yes you keep saying that you're a beginner writer BUT you could've learned from your predecessors right? chapters are short. At the end of some chapters you said they're a long one, but that's just because of the info dumps. dang there's even a chapter where he only change clothes and inform us his favorite color which is red and black . and don't you try delete this review . already skimmed those chapters up to 60+ but still, can't really bring myself to read this one. anyways, nice try and learn more.
wow this is great book... i loved it ... the characters are amazing... the synopsis got me hooked .. keep up the good work .. an absolutely amazing read.
MC is a forever child and is always protected by someone no matter how much he cultivates and because of this MC maintains his no killing policy because no one would come back to take revenge on him without dealing with his protectors this kept on going till 900+ chapters where he lost his protection and immediately starts killing monsters but lucky enough to not encounter any human who are willing to fight it out with him till death.
MC lacks forethought though it's said he has higher IQ but it's hardly shown in in his thought process.
This novel is different in a sense you're a story of a MC with child mentality though old enough to have his own grandsons.
Read about ten chapters. It's a decent waste of time but if you have absolutely anything else to do, it's probably better.
Initially, I was most interested in this novel.
Big, imposing mechas and mech pilots in a cultivation world? A bunch of supporting characters to use those Mechs? Them betraying him only to have their newfound power taken away when they lose their mech? Sounds interesting!
But no. First, the translator seems to think the plural of Mech is Meches. Which just looks stupid.
Secondly, once reading the description of the Mechs, you will realize they're actually androids! It's a completely different concept entirely! Instead of powering up weak supporting characters, he instead pulls shallow and obedient NPCs out of thin air to do his bidding.
The story seems pretty shallow. Every pretty woman has died and the MC assumes they are bad. There was no actual investigation done, or questioning. He goes straight into murdering people without a question, from day one, and seems like a pretty rough person.
So if you want to see a man, alone, building up an army of androids with shallow personalities, written by a translator who doesn't seem to care, based off of an author's writing I suspect was really equally as bad, go ahead.
Just don't expect anything crazy, and you can't be disappointed.