Sky_novel_lover
I’m caught up and the pacing is pretty good right now it feels like things are moving quite fast tbh
So.. there’s no romance right? Anything like sub-plot romance right? Cause I’m going to fully donate my 2 weeks for this if this hasn’t any cringe romance.
Very interesting finally I found another good one
The history of the story, specifically as its world building; when the character woke up, he found out that somehow, the magic technology of the current era has regressed. He feels that the history of the world has become 'somehow' distorted or someone interfered with it.I believe that he just doesn't bother looking up to history books, since such history books would be obviously more distorted than the current magic system. And if what the history book says is true, it would still not help since he does not have a way to prove it's true. It would just be detrimental to his progress, his real goal in his reincarnation, which is to get stronger.So no, He does not have a low Iq, since he would be capable of doing complicated magic and the like such as speculating of how the magic system off the current era came to be.Eq? I am not sure, but he knows how to read the atmosphere, so maybe, average?Just sharing my thoughts.
Very slow paced, many chapters only containing worthless dialogues, dilly dallying, wasting time.
I just have to agree with every comment here this is probably one of the greatest light novels I've ever read I highly recommend everyone give this a chance you will not be disappointed
Sure a very nice book
The worst in this batch of Trial read. The world building is not well explained like the author to expect us to know it.The power system is also confusing.
Thank you, guys, for your company and support. You really give me strengths to go on translating this CUISINE novel.Just like you, I'm often tempted to salivate when I'm translating the description of the tasty dishes. I'm also a foodie. : )
This is written badly. I can't say for sure why. It is normal English, it is not a bad translation like many others, it is just written in a way that I am bored and I am not interested in reading it.
It might be that the protagonist is too much interested in girls.
It is kinda like this:
1. Situation
He is sitting somewhere and googling a girl and the author goes on and on about woman.
2. Situation
A man is dying, the protagonist is paying attention to the body of the female doctor.
3. Situation
It will be decided if he has any chance to attend a certain university which is very very very important to him. All his time before was about trying to get into this university.
He is not able to look at the woman who is sitting nearby.
But he describes each button on her clothes and speculates about the size of her boobs.
I just stopped reading here. It was enough.
The author of this story is probably 12 years old and not able to talk to girls without thinking about ***. Ever.
Hi guys, this is Dukkha, the author of this novel. I wanted to clarify a few things that some of you may have been in doubt about. This story has no harem, there is romance and kingdom-building. Some people have commented that at times the story was fast-paced and unclear, I apologize for that. Finally, my first language is not English; unfortunately, I have no one to help me. I hope everyone has a good read!
i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying .
the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
