Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.
The use of first POV made the MC's struggles more relatable to the readers. The world building is done well, and the vivid descriptions made it very thrilling and heart pounding to read. Kudos for updating this very often, too. Keep it up and good luck in the contest! ^^
How beautifully well written!!??Just amazing!! ?Kuddos to you for writing such good story ?Hoping to read more chaptersBest wishes to you?
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I read this Web novel till 8 chaps and here are my thoughtspros1- The mc is ruthless, intelligent and overpowered2- Not much cultivation BS, short and straight to the point explanation.3- Good character introduction.cons1- Irregular updates2- A few typos I hope the author will release chapters regularly.
World building is amazing. The plot is great. Writing style and writing quality is fantastic. Love the characters, they all come to life. Really enjoyed reading it! The scenes are descriptive and every chapter I've read so far were immersive and interesting. I love it!What more can I say??Highly recommended!
Should really use the tags for what they're meant for. I dont care for reading an erotcia book with a sprinkling of fantasy. Thought it would be fine but sadly they didn't bother adding proper tags to it.
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So basically it just human form skill and not become real humanoid beast? And the MC dual cultivating with beast ?
I think you need to add tag for harem and dual cultivating
I am droping this novel at chapter 31 i got sick of to much forced romance there i just could not handle it any more the MC is made in good way to be op and the path to make a good novel but it just got too much some thing is bothering me from the start of the novel but it was not MC so im sorry to you the autor but this is my rew! T-T