Gabyzil
ima juat leave this here amd say it's good aa it is now in the future since its still new maybe more back ground info amd some stuff feels kinda forced but over all good for now maybe we'll see alittle depth in the future
The concept is good but the problem is the character development and story development are not upto the mark. The story is getting boring as i am reading ch 15.
A interesting story with a compelling world that unfortunately suffers from some severe pacing issues, with entire chapters dedicated to explain simple ideas, making the result feel like filler. I believe that if the author can work out this problem he is bound to be successful, since clearly he has talent.
I am really enjoying this reading. I like the special environment the author has created in this novel. It is really satisfing. I hope it will still entice my imagination. As for now, i really hope it gets more recognition. You earned it !
The MC is supposed to be fairly smart and capable but can't really think for himself and just follows the plot of his system. The story takes place in the US but people bow and otherwise function as though it is a Gotham city version of china.Over all it might be an interesting story but I can't enjoy it as it constantly breaks ones suspension of disbelief.
Really good so far. I'm personally enjoying this a lot. Keep up the good work. __________________________________________________________________
another mediocre story just like the 'My Vampire System' and I am sure it will be popular again coz that's the standard/bar for the readers of this platform.Had to drop this after reading some 30-40 chaps coz I just just couldn't get into the story. The quality that 99% of the novels here lack is 'Immersion' and that's the same for this novel too. Let's see of this review stands or will it be deleted to like the ones on MVS ! Delete it even if you want, I won't be bothered to give another review nor the story another chance.
This is a ver good read though i find some wording to be strange i think the Premise have great potential with a lot of mistery and action. this story is very solid and is worth a read for sure.
Loved the story, starts where the Mc got killed from experimenting by some people or something, but he reincarnated in a parallel world like the previous earth. After reincarnating he got special power, he meets all the people in his previous life, he meets him mother again, also other people who are you very important to him but died one after the other from various circumstances. He also saves the ghost girl in the tunnel that is supposed to be haunted and make her his pet, the ghost suggests him to have a harem of the people that are important to him. As so it continues from there on................
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i dont understand the chinese they love japanese anime and like to make fanfiction about it but when they make their own novels they are very racist and nationalist. It just ruins a good story, "i can incarnate everything" takes place on earth but it has 0 nationalism and it is a great story but these writers ruin everything when they make racist comments in their novel.
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