The story shows different scenes of different planets and the interconnection between them. It is explained very nicely, which enhances the reader's experience.
The only problem is misplaced use of double quotes.
The synopsis was rather confusing on my part but the story was good. The startup was interesting and the plotline is very planned out. The writing is spot on and the detail is incredible. Great job
yeah...... so....... your synopsis sound like a ripoff of the Dresden Files book series by Jim Butcher.....
The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!
This is a Great novel that no questions asked gets my blood boiling everytime I read through it I highly recommend giving this one a read. :-D
This book is a hidden gem and I'm glad I've found one! As a fan of Lord of the Mysteries I'm extremely happy that I've found another book set in a victorian era. Also it's very refreshing to see someone go away from cliché system-harem plot (it's very refreshing to NOT see them in the book, especially as a dedicated webnovel reader who started reading before the whole system shtic appeared).
The writing is very well paced and structured, characters are interesting to read about and the comedy is great! What else do you need from books?)) I definitely recommend to read this one and get it to the top
excited to see where this story goes! please keep up the good work .
The Author TurtleMaster finishes her book Incubus's Blood, but after doing so and thinking she's finished, she's visited by someone most unlikely. Asmodeus. He appears and murders her best friend Jonathan, right before forcing her to reincarnate as his son named Aster.
This is her story as the 2nd Incubus.
And the first year of her reincarnation is full of psychological tormention, obsessive love and heartbreak, and recovery before she can even get her mind straightened, all while hating the one, Asmodeus who did this to her. she resents him and becomes a Demon just like him maybe even worst.
But after she prepares for a battle 2 years from the start and how she's going to survive it, all she wants to do is survive and get these people that come around her are just insane and she's looking for just the normal.
[Currently at the start of Volume 3~]
Sigh... I have yet to finish your other novels how will I read these new ones o(TヘTo) Sigh.... so many sigh... I need to read, but I need to finish your other stuff as well. sigh...
Author let me tell you why you boycotted your own story at first for the early chapters, (I read until chap 27)can't speak about later chapters since I haven't read them, the wish thing is too big of a way to ask for power or destruction or whatever, the story's title is too big most of all when he doesn't get a speck as omniscient as I and many thought, I didn't want him op, but to me he feels too weak for what he asked, I can look past all that, very minor problems at the end if the Mc is good and interesting , that is the problem, you made reading him spiritually painful , he is very stupid, by plot if i understand and that is bad because reading what an idiotic character does is very irritating, you didn't even tell us why, you should have explained that clearly, maybe with a system window that he couldn't see at least then I would have had a reason to continue but you gave him the worst possible handicap being stupid and you gave the reason 50 chapters later?!!!? If you make a character like that and expect people to bear it for 1/4 of the story then I am sorry but I am out if you made him physically very weak but perceptive and cunning and with a helping secondary character (his sister, his cat, etc. ) that could help him fight and carry out the plans he strategizes it would have been an entirely different look but as I said you gave him the worst possible trait, making reading him insufferable
Vou dar 5 estrelas pq vc prometeu sexo sem compromisso, então nada de harém!!!! Mc livre.....................Obs,: preenchimento de letras........................
This is good. I highly recommend reading this story. The world-building is very nice. I read up to chapter 60 without noticing and was sad to find I read up to this point and there were no other chapters. I hope this is picked to be translated at some point because this is a nice read.