well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written
Very very generic in later stage, already read up to 400 in MTL. It just enough for you to passing time, and that's it. If you have nothing to read, then you can consider this...............
Does it have sex scenes romance or smut and a harem or all of them combined
I figured I should write a review as this may possibly be my favorite xianxia.
The quality of the writing is superb, the story is deep especially for a xianxia.
The story is written with a 'western' perspective as the MC is the classic reincarnated/transported from the 'real' world into the xianxia world but he is a westerner rather than chinese, this if nothing else is fresh and it does mean the references is more understandable for western readers.
I don't want to spoil the story so I'll just say it avoids, so far, tropes that I am well and truly tired of like cardbord cut out characters. Probably why I actually like this so much is that, the characters feel real and not just like an NPC with 2 lines and no substance.
Praying everyday for updates, thank you LivingSpoon for writing this.
A lovely start
Its a nice book with touch of reality........language is so nice that we feel it is happening nearby.....I loved this book....The boys are representative of todays genration ....and story makes aware us of the facts ....
This book has potential and i can see there is a bit of a harem genre to it and it would be such a waste if this novel go to such a path like having a wife on each race, I think the first 2 potential love interest is enough already because it tends to get very messy when authors start expanding the harem. Although I am still waiting for the author to put more depth in the surrounding like what is the name of the empire/country they belong to or even the general population of the village woudn't be bad but it is still early to whether this novel would turn out good or bad. I also notice a few mistakes in the grammar.
Finally, the book which I've waited has arrived! Hoping to see new content on the chapters. Good luck and have fun!
P.S. Don't mind this text since the review should have 140 characters and I just put this to fulfill the requirements.
I would definitely say this novel is a gem. Honestly the world building is really good. And the way the novel describe the world building is not too lenghty yet the information dump is good enough for the readers to understand and imagine the way the world works.Honestly the thing that hooked me is definitely the huge potential in how the world building works and the good and fluid writing style. The only thing that is 'okay' for the moment is the lack of interesting characters. But honestly im okay with basic characters if the world and plot itself is interesting. I would rather have basic characters than really stupid and dumb character from most of the webnovels i read which annoys the shit out of me. Anyway thats all, give it a try if you are reading this to get a feel of someone who have read till chapter 57 at the point of writing this. I can say the novel is top quality for now. (Fingers crossed it will keep that same quality)
This novel is like I might be a cultivation big shot but mc is better,he is not as dumb as mc of I might be cultivation big shot............
Let me see...System ✓Reincarnation ✓World Bulding ✓Weak to Strong ✓Magic ✓Insects ✓Hmm... It's a yes from me! Hope this money-grabbing site selects this gem!
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