The writing was captivating, The characters were believable and I cared about them,The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down and I look forward to witness a more upstanding story.
Don't read this if you're obsessed with tiny details, the story is most enjoyable when viewed on the bigger picture. The MC is an absolute joy to read with his crazy yet somewhat unrealistic ideas, it's amazing seeing the repercussions and cause of his actions, despite knowing it'll be a short novel it's a joy to read in bursts!
This story is good and I like the idea of ML waking up in a book that he trash talked. I believe there's room for improvement in the writing quality. It's not bad by any means, but it's not the best it could be.
Also the story is a bit forgettable and I struggled to remained interested. It's a good idea, but it doesn't quite stick the landing for me.
I can tell it'll get better as it goes on, but for now I'll just say this story is good enough.
It was a thrilling start. I expect even more thrills later on. Hope I'll get to see lots of interesting characters and enjoy a good story onward. I'll be looking forward to it.
could you please stop with PAV PIV POV ? it feel lame,its reduce the fun of reading a books,
great story the only thing that i really hate about it is the word witch that you use instead of which.
The first arc was amazing it captivated me and got me hooked not completely expecting a story like that, however after the first arc the translation went down hill to the point that I can barely read it..
well what to say story well downhill quite fast MC is constant struggling in fights
Sorry, I could not get past chapter 8. It's OK to give the MC some challenges, but this author threw too much drama at him. Then we get other characters that suddenly seem to get stronger as well and the prospect of multiple girls done for the sake of milking points. The cheat, so far has a grand title...but everything seems to be a random thing and you know how plot armor loves those...
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This is just another lazily written system novel. These things appear like ants out of the woodwork. I am astounded that this lazy writing is still widely praised by hundreds of people. Then again these are the same people to enjoy an isekai novel about a main character being a stick. Overall the quality works on the site are terrible.
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