Frustrating read. Info dumps. They aren't necessary. Its a superficial way of adding background. I say that since the impact of that knowledge is none. It's a detriment to the narrative since the flow of the story is interrupted seemingly every paragraph for a random tidbit of info. Some novels have auxiliary chapters for power scales, levels, etc. I prefer the novels that include the information, as it becomes "necessary" to know. Rather than the author saying, this is all important stuff, here is a whole chapter for info that will serve you nothing. Here is a block of text about a random aspect of the world that doesn't matter at all.The notes act as if all readers have 0 IQ. Both info dumps and author's.The author's notes are intrusive. Random comments in the text, or just at the end of text. They sometimes are simple and harmless like, "memorable visit indeed". Its just pointless to add. Other notes are defensive notes, as if to defend against readers saying why MC is being reckless, or something else. MC goes potion crafting, fear not, we have very necessary info dumps about alchemy to explain things. Author note talks about how MC has shadow guards following him all the time. Next chapter, he is interacting with them. The note is pointless if we can read about these things. I've got other problems but just these 2 make the novel a plodding read.
This is actually a nice book. Loved it. Update more and fast please ?
Action ✔️
Plot ✔️
Great Characters ✔️
This story has every element to get you hooked. Set in a dystopian world where the inhabitants of earth are transferred to, everyone is left to fend for themselves. Not only do the people have to worry about monsters, the fight for power and survival amongst humans and alien cohabitants requires everyone to watch their backs. However, everyone is equipped with a powerful AI system called the Oracle and it up to the individual how to make the best use of it.
The story is very well-written and the plot is quite compact. The start is a bit slow but once the action starts the novel becomes unputdownable. The progression of the character is quite slow if you compare it to other novels of the same genre but that doesn't make it even a tad uninteresting. Each setting is vivid and enjoyable and the story is never a drag.
The characters each have a distinct personality. The growth of the characters' personalities border real world people making them lifelike. The chapter length is quite good, and although there is a single release daily, the chapter is a big one.
All in all, I really like this novel and would suggest everyone to give it a read. The only complaint that I have to author-san is that he should release more chapters as I cannot have enough of this novel.
Shameless Author here: I would like to thank all of you for reading my fan fic. It just motivates me that so many people would read my fic. And if you have any suggestions please dont be afraid to ask me.
This stiry escalated so fast I litrily did not even get to comprehend what was going on and he was litrily getting random power ups like some z fighter
Best novel on trial read this week so far, but that doesn't mean much.
MC ability is so OP he could reshape the world in his favor, but he just goes around killing those that offend him and for some reason learns boxing.
It would take one second for him to find out how to save his girlfriend, but no. He has to learn boxing.
MC has the combined brain power of 3 fleas, but that is still not enough for him to avoid being identified literally the first time he acts. It is almost like the author gave the MC an ability that is too OP for the world, so he had to reshape his own creation to increase word count.
For once I want an intelligent MC, who can actually do something without sabotaging himself at every turn.
Updated!
This isn't a review of me praising my work. This is a sort of disclaimer in case readers don't get suddenly disappointed.
1. The MC - Don't try to understand him. Because he has many dynamics to him, it would mislead the readers into thinking that he is 'THAT type of character' when he isn't. His attitude on certain points would also be questioned. Sometimes, he would act out of character. It has been explicitly stated that the story is aware of it. In time, the questions would be answered.
2. Plot too weird and random - As a beginner author, there are scene jumps in the beginning but it would disappear some chapters later. There would be some random events but they aren't closely related to the main plot.
3. Atmosphere - 80% of the second volume is gloomy, not dark. Don't get the wrong impression from the beginning and the synopsis.
4. Pacing - Events happen one after another. But I wouldn't call it fast as if the time is considered, it is slow. The MC doesn't get the time to breathe.
This is my response to the well-deserved criticisms. If there are any questions, you can comment. I usually respond to the comments.
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Bland. Bland as heck. The dialogue is just weird and the sentences seemed forced. Info dumps don't help and the MC is basically a robot. It was a chore to read this.
Its a generic cultivation novel, lots of random killing, bad characters, plot points don't go anywhere or are forgotten. generic cultivation world and stupid mc.
I mean he's from earth and went to that world, it's never mentioned again. His character doesnt suit someone from earth, gets to killing everyone very quickly without hesitation, acts like other cultivation MC's, stupid and arrogant.
Every new character its just another, oh a debt let me go kill a bunch of people and collect it, repeat forever.
It's not a new concept, the storyline is basically non existent the world building is non existent and horribly told. The villians are one dimensional. Everyones a basic copy and paste villain.
Honestly is such a low quality novel, what can you expect from a chinese cultivation novel. Theres only a few 'good' ones and the rest are just bad copy's.
In fact this entire novel idea is ripped off another novel with a similar story.
My recomendation is avoid.
Surprisingly good great writing I saw nothing to complain about Very good character development and the story is not too wrapped up in my point of view
So hard to read. The translator/editor or whoever comments on every other sentence. Half of a chapter is nonsense from them.
Only on chapter 2, and this combined with a boring start is making me consider dropping