no problem better than a rushed ending...if the author releases the new book after a year
Any recommendations?
Not a bad waste of time but the end felt a little rushed.
Get the gender clear, use he, she properly
Update this novel plz
it's trash but still better than the other trash...........................................................................................................................
fast-paced developments and hot-blooded action=good
many terms are lost in translation (CN to ENG)=readable but bad
arrogant MC, short-sighted MC (no long-term planning); hypocritical MC (*I don't kill womenz even the ones privy to my dad's murder bc reasons; takes in a stranger who brings trouble to his non-cultivator family and blames outsiders who have a feud with the stranger)
needs more world-building MC focuses almost exclusively on revenge
good
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Must give this novel 5 rating cause why not? The tags are literally my favourite
this is 100% a fanfic
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Some pretty good stuff.
I think you do well to make his weakness bearable. The power system was just explained 30-35 chapters in but I was quite confused early on but no matter.
Anyways this has some good potential and I’ll be following this (hopefully) daily, so don’t drop author :)