Aztec_Azazel
MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.
Make sure you are better and don't risk your health over a few chapters and make sure to make many instead. even if we have to WAIT! Your story are progressing in a direktion that make me believe the story! I live the life of the character when I read the story!
The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
Another hidden gem, uploaded silently. Let's see if it goes unnoticed. For those interested, is a faceslap novel, the MC is basically an OP sheltered young lord but ignorant of the outside world, wich makes him decided scape and roamed the world meeting possible followers, slapping the face of the disrespectful and being domineering when the situation is needed so it's funny and entertaining... good for those that enjoyed LoHP, Absolute Teacher, and so.
I am the exp of my sowrd.Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.I have created over a thousand useless reviews.Unknown to death, nor know to life.Have withstood pain to create many reviews.Yet, those hands will never hold anything.So as i pray... Unlimted exp works!
this story is very good, maybe the atmosphere of the movies is very idyllic, but I think that's part of the charm. Angela is one of the few reincarnates who has problems with the contrast of her past life and her current one. Just great.
Why is it that webnovel still gives us these random crap books that are just copy-pasted of a different book but done worse. Please webnovel stop only putting random trash into the site, the good boy social credit points must be worth it.
Todays date is 1/21/2021 and their are 39 chapters released so far. I have read 37 of them. I am very very exited about this novel so I may be a bit biased.For writing quality I think the author has done a fine job. Also I have not seen any mistakes but I am not the best with English grammar.Updates are a bit slow with the author releasing them every two to three days at a time but the author has said that it will pick up after they get more written. Story development is good. It is a bit faster than I expected only with the mc leveling pretty fast (it is explained with his abilities(the author includes a nice balance to a great skill) and I do not think it would take the mc that long to reach the level cap before the end of the major ark but I am sure that may not be the actual level cap, and I am only 37 chapters in so a lot could change. To truly now what I am talking about you would have to read it. Which I recommend. Character design is good I did not see any problem with it as of now. It can be improved but this is not why I am reading the novel so it is not a major concern of mine. The author does a good job describing the monsters also. World background is top notch. Very good. Information is important that words cannot describe it entirely. So I think having the mc utilize the information he has would be integral to the story. I am not saying that the mc does not already but I am looking forward to how the mc moves forward from here. Here is to power, cheers "Know thy self, know thy enemy. A thousand battles, a thousand victories."Thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful start to this novel that has so much potential that it is bursting out of the seems with it. Live long and prosper.
