i like the Book. what where are the next chapters?
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10/10
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Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!
I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation.
I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.
I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.
I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops.
But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.
If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.
I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
The book so far is amusing, and I love how the Mc is slowly becoming a badass that gets his hands dirty, and love how the story continues to get darker and darker.
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Good story but too bad it stopped adding more chapters, good plot and character building. Way too short and it was left at a good spot so I'm a little disappointed
This is crazy, I feel that the story goes slow and fast at the same time, there are some gaps in the plot of the story but they have an Explanation with other facts, the creativity with which the author reads this is unique
This book is very captivating it's a pity the premium chapters starters from chapter.I do not mind purchasing but before I purchase I want to know if it's worth the purchase.The start is very detailed and it's close to what reality is about.The title dark honor is a suits the storyline.Well done AUTHOR!!!!!Now open a few more chapters
Even though the title is 'the incubus system' I would like if somehow the could also wield light energy. After all he is a nephilim. He should have this advantage , besides it would also allow us insight into the angels world maybe.
this novel is awesome, I enjoyed it a lot a whole new concept where the mc became a pet hahaha and try to get favorability points .............................................................................................................................