Excellent Novel...............................................................................................................................................
The ending is quite abrupt. I guess the author got bored of writing the story or ran out of ideas and just decided to find a point to just end it. Some plots never went anywhere and some were just left unresolved.
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Like it... waiting for more updates.
love the story so far keep up the good work don't lest people get you down
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Uma história muito boa, existem alguns erros ou coisas ainda não explicadas .estou parando de ler por não poder pagar os capítulos, mas ainda recomendo para quem estiver com tempo para ler.
Interesting character plot. I like how Larry is Calm and reads the situation quickly. I'm just confused of the character's looks but apart from that everything else is cool. Keep writing author San.
This is a good book. More non-fiction than fiction and has a similar feel to the book, "Between Two Junes is a Forest" which was written by Geoffrey Dilenschneider in 2003 when he was 16 years old. A journal that describes a teenage boy's journey for a year (between one June, to the next June).
Just like that, this journal is comprised of the author's thoughts, his poetry, and various aspects of his life. His struggles in school and at home are detailed and show a down-to-earth perspective that many teenagers will find relevant in their own lives.
Adults may reflect on their past **** lives as they read this. It's a refreshing look at life from the eyes and ears of a **** writer from a different part of this world.
Read this with an open mind. Enjoy~
Lucy is not the only one who has been in the same situation as the last time we had a good time 7pm in our lives and we are so glad to have been there with 7 and I am not a big fan of the family are you and I just want you to be happy with her
I've only read the prologue but I have to leave a comment on this
One of the best prologues on this entire site. It actually does the job of hooking you in, I felt like one of the demons listening to the middle age mans story. Gave me goosebumps
Great. I really like his personalities(Cuz he's so EVIL, and that's cool thought.) And the other reason I like Him cuz hes not that hypocrite.
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it is an overall nice novel but can you please change Or rewrite the name of the novel it does not match the story of the novel.
Dear readers, hello. I am now resuming the updates for this book. Before that, I have made some adjustments and modifications to parts of the plot. The specific changes are as follows:1. The level of the pact between Alexander and Laura has been changed from 200 to 1000.2. The form of the Turkey has been adjusted from a dragon to a thunderbird.3. The name of the top structure in the City of Hope has been changed.4. Alexander additionally acquires a pair of very powerful eyes.5. Karu forges a sword for Alexander, but only completes half of it.6. Some character names have been adjusted and unified.7. Clichés have been removed to make the reading more fluid.