The first chapters have a few spelling mistakes and a little bad writing but it gets better(I hope) as I get used to this writing thing, as it is my first time writing a story.
I like that it's not all about war and their prowess their are also part that you can't stop but laugh when Raon and Wrath is bantering each other
Interesting apocalypse novel. Don't let1 star comment turn you away. I don't think he/she gave a fair assessment for this author. Good luck, author! Hope you win the competition! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.
Wonderful story telling and from a reader who has read the previous book Top star this one has much better scope and story. The characters are well described with a clear world background. A well written start
The only problem is a bit of lack of emotions conveyed. But this gets better over time so no problem
Naisu! Naisu! Naisu! I'd say these three words only buh this is a review sooo
I wuv this novel! Everything's great! Characters, plot and all. Heck, those fight scenes keep me tied to it.
2.6
heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 24/01/2021 @chap100
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
Ratings
Conclusion
short review:
You came here for R-18? You are at the right place!
You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place!
long review:
pros:
1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel
2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!!
3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it...
cons:
1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great!
2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this)
3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romance
RATINGS:
writing: 8/10
update: 9/10
plot: 8/10
characters: 8/10
pacing: 8/10
dialogues: 8/10
entertainment: 9/10
OVERALL: 4.1/5
Conclusion:
Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel.
World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters...
A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot.
To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!
I have read my fare share of trash and this is among the top, wonderful premise and the author took a hot and scalding dump on it, don't waste your time.
just another cliche crap novel don't bother reading it
it will just kill your brain cells
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the biggest problem the story has is things that happen off screen. information is obtained, system ui is explored, and abilities are obtained without any reader knowledge.
The entire digital realm and what that means is ignored entirely, acting the same as a system-magic transmigration to another atom-based world.
the final major problem I can think of is that mc has changed class three times already and I have no idea what that means, if it means anything.
the above being said, it's a fun story with developed characters that are different from each other and interact in funny and interesting ways. character growth may be abrupt, but it's better than stagnant characters.
I feel that this story is a lot better than most of the newer trial novels with a interesting story and so far good kingdom building so I don’t understand how another time travel revenge medicine book is far more enjoyed by the people I am not saying it’s bad by any means but I just feel like this ones should get better attention.