Immortal_kid
i couldn't stop my self from laughing.... ilove the pick up lines... ilove the story... and i love the author, thanks for your hard work... keep it up... waiting for the update.
The Title and book cover is misleading. Totally, very misleading. The story went from ordinary to a roller coaster of emotions. As I always prefer a book that tugs your emotions is a good book worth reading.
Eating also need her to serve him becos a wife has to serve her husband. You disabled? What u mean u eat yourself you will have no face????? Killyourself
Honestly this kind of story is new for me, I am quite interested to read it.♥️♥️♥️
If the author make the spells and power ranking more detailed this will be good af
world background and writing quality of this novel is top noch ..alas other than that all things gone tooo much down side after begining of 2nd volume (around 120 chapter or somthing)
you who is thinking to read this novel be aware ..yess you will gonna like this novel very much because of mc's character and actions on 1st volume but after that from 2nd volume is allllll LOooosttttt ...at one point it seems author himself forgot how he made mc's character and it will pain to see mc's actions on 2nd volume ...so if you like to see how an alfa intelligent ruthless mc becomes idiot wimp beta side character in 2nd volume of the novel than you can happily start reading now otherwise don't bother with this ...i have droped this after reading 2nd volumes 100 chapters of somthing where mc's idiotic actions are hard to bearable and all focused are got on the Fmc ...author if you are reading this comments do work on mc's character if you don't wanna losse more readers otherwise
Interesting story but poorly written... The writing style and the bad grammar make it somewhat hard to have fun reading this. With an editor this might become a rather good story.
This novel is so fantastic and awesome, simple
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I really am excited for that one I mean just imagine the reaction of the gods when they need to pay up.
Could’ve been a good book but the last 40 chapters make it a waste of time the ending is just all shoved into one chapter as well ridiculous
one it's a copy novel so point for something new
two this more like the first rough draft people make before starting writing a novel as it has a lot,he ll lot of inconsistencies in every character
three the cheat is just super op on the lvl of wish fulfilment novels but still it's ok but the mc is idiot when using it even a 3th Grader would would call him dumb
four a few other reasons are already mentioned by different reviews
I am currently enjoying the story although it’s still at it start if it goes on and develop i think there is a chance for this to become the new big thing. An importan thing that destroy many stories with “evil” mc is that the author becomes afraid and bit by bit turn him into a generic good guy. [img=fp]
