Not seen any novels on here with a black main Character #BLM I think I started reading the minute I saw the Jamaica flag, not yo take away from the fact this is already one of my favourite reads and I haven't even caught up yet.
The pace of the story is amazing although there is a little to be desired due to short chapters.
I would recommend to anyone who likes fantasy and wuxia.
Who could imagine an author to take a Mouse and raise a Dragon.
The switch between Enola and Sandra definitely made them realise what they previously had compare to what they got themself into now, as the author said in her book titled "I will make up for my mistakes" that "we all agree to the fact that we truly understand the value of a person when we lost them and all we want is a second chance to makeup for our mistakes." loved the story, plot and the characters! Brilliant job done as always by the author!
I absolutely loved this novel. If you like parodies then you'll love this. It may start out a little slow but if you keep reading the pay off is going to make you weep wet silly tears of joy.
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Guys, you need to relax and cut the author more slack on his first good novel. I love the concept of this world, and the world background building is utterly astounding. I also love the characters and actual story arcs with them. It doesn't make sense you guys don't care about the characters since there is honestly no guarantee darkness will spare them. Now for the criticism, this story gets 3.8 stars. I feel like the stability of updates should be a little better, maybe like a stable chapter every 2 days. Also, the novel's pacing is a little too fast and in the beginning, Thomas feels more like the main character than darkness. The romance between Darkness and Darkness simply doesn't make sense and feels extremely forced. There was no development to explain how she's there, It's also explained multiple times it's not in Darkness' nature to feel the romance. Yet, for some reason with absolutely no development, Mc meets the 'previous Darkness' and she loves him to bits as soon as she comes in. Also, the grammar is good but the punctuations and commas need to be more focused. Also, the wording in the sentences could use a bit more work in my opinion.
totally enjoying the story so far.... excited for the rest
You can see that its mechanical translated. Sometimes he and she get switched. But its still a lovely story. Thank you so much for taking the time to translate it.
I really enjoyed this storyline! it is a must read! keep up the good work!
This beginning of the story arouses the reader's curiosity. I can't wait to read the chapters that follow...Who will be the most cunning? the most intelligent ? Most able to adapt to life in the galaxy? Cyborgs or mutants? Or maybe others that remain to be discovered?
I feel like this story is not like other martial arts novels and I've been into it since its prologue. The protagonist transmigrated into a good family, I am so happy for him because mostly if the lead isn't born into a cruel family, they are usually born to be a kid who is always bullied or is trash in their family. But this protagonist's family is so good, hope this family will be fine afterward.
If you are like me, you read the synopsis and got your hopes up, only to be let down by the piss poor writing, the translation is fine for the most part, but the main character and every other character so far are totally boring, such an interesting concept ruined by an inept author.
But as always, this novel is so shit that it will be picked.