well well...another work of brother Paranoid, what can I say, if you have already read his previous works then in this novel you will get surprised because author improved quite a lot ,for example you can see he is using more new vocabularies ( and it seems he also calmd down his fetishes too
I'm shameless but not to shameless.
it's a good book just at the moment to little chapter for me to post an proper review. But all in all it's a fun book to read.
A very unique and capturing start to the book! The main character is very interesting and I think readers will have a fun type getting to know his personality and feelings! Wonder what's coming in the next chapters...
One thing I had a hard time w was keeping up with the continuous long descriptions of places and structures in the beginning chapters. It would have been better to add a few interactive scenes in between to break it up a bit, but I think it's just me haha. Over all it's very nice Good luck and good work Fellow Author!!!
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i like the novel but i have an issue with webnovel not only did they shorten the tria chapters from 60 to 40 and now that 40 isn't released all at once but now they don't even give us the first 20 chapters free
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Keep going author, this novel will be big one day. just cause its a fresh one . the veterans who just read new novels will like this one a lot .
can't wait to read this awesome novel, I'm boiling inside ✌️??? this is going to be an epic one booyah!!! and I can't wait, I can't wait I can't wait AUTHOR RELEASE THE NOVEL PLEASE
An interesting concept with a bit of a twist. A demon starting at the bottom of the food chain. Well, if that isn't worth reading, then I don't know what is! Give it a try :)
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I had read this up and it quite... Hurm....
I don't have the word to describe it.. But I can say that I'm not enjoying it... Also there's a few plot hole around and also some of ridiculous stuff that author just chuck under the rug.. I just don't feel comfortable with it.. Its not my cup of tea.
I actually would really enjoy this novel, but the MC's personality really irrates me to no end, I wanted to keep reading, but I just feel like he's personality is not going to change at all, and that will make for a none enjoyable read for myself.