It’s unoriginal there was a story a lot earlier than this where the mc was given money to develop games if he failed he would be able to make a lot more than if he succeeded so he kept praying that he would lose money but always ended up making amazing games
A good story but the editing, grammer and translation are absolutely terrible and make it so frustrating to read.
Author, I beg you, please, please, please update Daily Life With A Lilim. This has become my favorite novel, please update it.✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
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A very interesting read. A very different concept from the usual cultivation novels. Only downside is that it seems to be an MTL. So it is sometimes difficult to understand the meaning of some sentences but luckily it does not have much impact on the readability of the entire story.
writing is pretty good for the most part, plenty readable, however occasionally some explanations get somewhat convoluted, but not really a deal breaker.
updates arent exactly fast, but writing is difficult so i cant hammer the author for it really.
story, honestly it starts out pretty good, till chapter 30-40ish the story is pretty interesting, new things happen, but after that i feel like things starts to get stale pretty quickly, combined with the fact that i feel like the author almost forgot that the game system was a thing between chapter 40-100. theres just a lot of repeat fighting. the power ups feel boring in a way, "i want to see the world in chaos" and he gets time dialation? and then its never brought up again. the cross/church is talked about being something good for like 15 chapters. and its just exp bonus?. ive rambled enough here lets move on.
characters. they arent bad per say, just occasionally bipolar. i kind of expect a "reasonable tyrant" type of mc, but he just switches between dumb violence, and stupid sympathy.
world background is fine-ish, and is fed pretty dynamically, eg not info dumps. but i still feel like i know nothing.
i think alot of this can be attributed to the small scale of the current "world" since its effectively like a 1km radius and its being described almost a bit too much for whats actually there?
anyway i ended up putting it on hold at chapter 128, i dont hate the story, it just feel really dull to binge. good luck
The character of the MC is shown clearly in the first few chapters of the story, but before the cliche of the cool and emotionless guy in a high school gets old, the plot starts and the gods sh*t on everything.
The premise of the story in attractive: a world abandoned by the gods, leaving the humans to face ragnarok alone. Sounds bleak. This reader hopes that if humanity prevails there should be some kind of reward, like the one who stopped it becoming the One True God and not letting all the others back in because of their cowardice, the assh*les.
The action is fast-paced, the MC is a wank fantasy, there are monsters everywhere. What is not to like? The grammar is fine, and writing style can come with experience.
The story has potential and is stepping along nicely. I hope it lives up to the excellent beginning.
Keep up the good work, author!
The novel smell like plagiat of Night Ranger
both have reincarnation into game world
both were legendary rogue class before reincarnation
the systems are nearly identical
from the look of things both will use double daggers
both have little sibling that need help
there will be frequent contact with gods
after the poor 5 chapters I could mistake it for Night Ranger
*coughs for attention*
Ladies, gentlemen and otakus( I swear I'm not discriminating , it's just my way to talk to those people who love novels as much as their lives)
I'm giving 5 stars for this novel as the first reviewer.
*Bows*
*Claps*
Great potential, the start of a progressive story, and experience. The MC starts as many of us (neets) and goes the extra mile into a place that can change the minds of the players. I predict him to participate and change while doing so.
This book is one of the only great flash fanfics on this website. If your looking for great character development and regular updates this is a fanfic for you
Writing quality is good has alot of potential and for the story it's very interesting where the MC is using hero status to reform a kingdom through strategy and technological development