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I really liked how the story is progressing. it can be seen how much effort the author has given at the story.I am looking forward to exciting things.
Me gustó la novela, pero aveces salta mucho en los hechos y hay que releerlo para comprender bien algunos hechos, ojala suban los siguientes capítulos pronto
While there were some problems at the beginning Of the book, In which some Claimed it was a carbon copy of another, slowly, This novel developd into its own story. The characters were interesting, The world was was exciting, and the plot was Exhilirating. For reasons unknown Unfortunately, this novel has been abruptly canceled. It seems there were some hidden BTS complications with the author, as hinted in the apparent Final chapter. It is really a shame, and has caused me unending sorrow that the novel was cast away the way it did. I would hope in the future the author would decide to resume the novel again, and would love if they could see these words i have left for the book. This wasnt a carbon copy of another. It was not plagiarism. It was its own entity that merely used training wheels until it could walk on its own feet. My closing statement would be that this novel has entertained me much and has brought happiness to me and so many others on this platform. If you are, or were, a fan of this novel, please leave your feedback in hopes it may reach the author one day. Thank you! [img=update]
simply blatant copy of the legendary mechanic..........................................................................................................................................................................
At first the writing quality is not very good but it's gets clearer and better as the chapters go by. The story is also very good.
Keep up the good work author.
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Loving the book
Rose's backstory really got to me
Who is the blonde molf in cover picture she looks like someone from a manga but cant remember which one please do tell if anyone knows?
Also more chapters
dont do romance too early
The story is really a fantasy, most people crave for, I am able to enjoy the characters development and most especially the world, my mind does pretty well imagining what u trying to create. I feel the story twist will get more wilder
