no arrogant MC , no killing of entire clans,the beginning isn't quite great, but if you go past 10- 20 ch you wont regret it, a slice of life/comedy/action what more do you want?(its gold).
I just love the mafia setting and everything in it. A great job you did here Author
keep up the good work :)
Can't wait to read more....
This story does have very bad gramer. If you get past that the story at least has a plot, one that focuses on MC getting a harem going. The plot moves along fast which can be a good or bad thing. The system helps by constantly odering the MC to do quests to get women to love him. If he fails MC will die.
Beautifully written, the character growth is nice and subtle over the chapters. This is a slow burn, but it allows you to get to know and love the characters. The character designs are great! I wish this story updated more, and I can't wait for the future chapters. Definitely recommend.
Love the book so much. Caught myself laughing and gasping at the shenanigans of Ron and everyone else the entire time! Keep up the good work Author!✨?
How to say it?Redo of Heler in Zombie Apocalypse.With generic r*** MC.
Writing is top notch, I expect nothing from my wonderful and charming editor... cough, cough... ahem, story development is impeccable and character design can only be described as quality. unfortunately updating stability stops me from giving this amazing work a perfect 5 stars. Anyway, keep up the work author, this is nice ✨
I guess it’s time to write a new review and clarify some things about some things about the MC so you know what you are coming to read.
First of all, thank you for the powerstones and support for the story. This was only supposed to be a pet project, but we end up winning the bronze tier for WFP#18 despite starting a bit late :)
Alright, onto the main story. If you are looking for a super duper OP mc right from the start, this is probably not the story for you.
MC is just an ordinary everyday guy (like you and me), who happens to transmigrate into the ultimate villain on earth, but doesn’t get all the benefits that comes with it from the start. He still has to work for it.
That being said, the MC is still plenty OP with room for staggering growth compared to the mass.
Feel free to leave a like and some questions about anything you are unsure of pertaining to the story here.
That is all, and happy reading!
I read this and all I can say is the MC isnt developed. He is supposed to be a grown man that was killed by his lover and got a second chance. but instead he acts like a kid, and not some *****. He seems more like a pre****. no hint of maturity. And theres no proper planning of what to do [ he has his goals of wanting to protect family, thats there ] but the actual execution isnt. this should be explored. He hasnt made any plans on that and rather focuses on his school life.
And the MC is a mental retard or atleast denser than a neutron star. 8 yrs of marriage, wife never slept with him and he never got the hint that she didnt even like him, even in his death he said I though u loved me, didnt realise she hated him after she shot him [ what happens in story- unless changed ]
And this isnt some **** thing ,,,no they are mature adults and MC dosnt have any mental illness. so he is just stupid. this cant even be passed off as disillusion of a yandere lover cause if she disliked the MC this much why the fk wouldnt u not notice? for 8 yrs? does not make sense.
suggestion.. instead of focusing on the the social life, etc focus on the MC himself and his actual planning and execution and use of future knowledge to do things and show this. the planning, execution, process, etc. And try to mature the MC. he honestly feels like some pre t.een
rather than an *****. the face slapping moments and him feeling better than kids all way younger than him makes more apparent.
I read this couple months ago here...same author?
**: that story had a pretty stupid moment where no one recognized him after he cut his hair. and it was soo exaggerated and focused on. the couple chps after the hair cut were all about the people not realizing its him or chicks getting wet over him. so forced. Hair cuts change people , definitely agree....but to this extent where the mother, father and brother dosnt realize? so stupid [ and this is why I remember this bk and am asking whether u are the same author, if u are, do avoid this moment ]
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Cheap copy " I accept disciple and become stronger," when you read that novel will you know what I am talking about. I checked this novel is newer them that Author doesn't even change name of sect and main character! if read then read that you will be totally confused!
Literally Copy Paste
It's got face slapping if you're into that. The Mc seems is a idiot who doesn't understand nuance and what his place in the world is, he is a mortal vs cultivators and he antagonize them for a bet because obviously they don't believe a mortal can repair a immortal sword (basic flying sword). the bet is his life for breaking said sword and if he wins the humiliation of the cultivator, like what? he is basically homeless with only the workshop. so instead of money to pay off the debts his parents incurred after thier death he wants something vain for his ego. he was literally useless before the system, living like a rich young master with the income of his cultivator parents.
Fazit first (200 chapters): It is an interesting story, worth reading.
The story starts very chaotic in the early chapters. Many things seem to make no sense whatsoever. Over many chapters the reader learns more and more about the multi layered secrets around system, VR as well as real world with their royalty.
The characters seem emotionally scarred with many callenges. At Ch 200 things are far from solved, but there is at least some clarity about the situation and the background. History seems to matter quite a bit, and it comes to light bit by bit over time. The reader learns about (almost) everything with the MC - step by step - and there are very few 3rd party POVs explaining things.
The story is a good read so far and I will write another review once I reach the current chapters. Around chapter 200 things seem to kind of "start off" and get even more interesting.
There are lots of weird things in this story, but I believe the author will solve everything in due time. So: My recommendation - go for it!
The novel has romantic content and mild sexual themes (on the level of kissing, petting and making out including felatio) which should be rated R-16. (up to ch 200, I have not yet read beyond)