one of the best story out there , MC likable and the story is really good . i really like this novel ,the only flow in otherwise perfect novel is the slow update, the translation quality is not bad but the update speed is really really slow. plz Qidian do something about this .still tho i appreciate the work you do Novel Sage team , its just at the very least you j need to deliver what you promise (5 chapters a week) .
Protagonista con sentido común(más raro que un huevo de dragón abisal divino con rastros de un divino emperador... Lol) me encanta como la historia no gira en torno al protagonista, cuando empecé a leer esta novela recuerdo cuando Duncan era un mortal y estaba cerca de un tesoro espiritual y los comentarios decían 'cómo obtendrá el tesoro' y en vez de alguna trama forzada para que lo consiga, todo fue usado para que se uniera a una secta
Very great novel until you hit chapter 41 where the translator that has ruined numerous novels with their awful translations yet again shows off their work.
So far I have read the first 30 chapters so this is just an initial impression. I have mixed feelings about this novel so far, a great idea for the story, main character is well described and has an unique character and background, pretty good world building and explanations of how magic helps and not helps with cultivating. But at the same time some of the choices made in the world building and character designs make some of the things I dislike about cultivation / Eastern Fantasy stories inevitable.The main character is a mage who has reached immortality and got bored off it, kills himself and transmigrates to a cultivation world. This is a great story idea and looking at the world building and explanation of how magic works the author shows he thought through how magic should work in a cultivation world. What I find a pity is that the cultivation world is one of those where the strong oppress the weak, everyone is too eager to fight or have too big ego's with not enough self confidence which leads to an excessive urge to show superiority when personal honor is deemed to be slightly attacked, without there being a good explanation for this behavior it feels too much like a forced way to ensure a fight in every city. Also because this behavior results in a lot of fights it is very easy to have a lot of cannon fodder fights for stupid reasons. I don't have a problem with cannon fodder fights but I do have a problem with fights for stupid reasons. Having read many cultivation / eastern fantasy novels the one trend that I experience when reading these novels is that the more forgettable or dumb an opponent is the worse it reflect on the main character (eg if the mc kills a lot of idiots he becomes an idiot killer). Some stories try to fix this by giving these cannon fodder characters a background story but that only improves it if the fight itself starts for a good reason (pretty ladies, not wanting to give an answer or loss of face are more often than not poor reasons to start a fight). And maybe because a lot of novels do follow this pattern it might be seen as part of the genre but I see it more as a symptom of the pressures that daily releases bring with them and this results in authors not having, or maybe taking, enough time to properly plan out the smaller encounters in the story (and as a result I have more problems with these idiotic cannon fodder apearing in the beginning of a novel than when they apear after several 100's of chapters). I'm not sure if this mc has a lot of encounters with idiotic cannon fodder, I haven't read far enough, but the first encounter with cannon fodders did not make me happy, impressed with how magic was used but the reasons for the fight was not very good. And the first fight for a good reason was again not very satisfying because it was a lot of chapters to describe a mass slaughter without any suspense because the mc was already too strong. For such a one sided fight the shorter it is the better. And the last thing I rather not sea in a cultivation / Eastern Fantasy stories are female characters fall in love within a couple of paragraphs. I don't have a problem with the peanut gallery having ladies fall in love at first sight because that is similar to girls and boy bands but when the main heroin, or at least what appears to be a woman who is going to be next to the mc for a lot of chapters, falls in love in a few paragraphs it is for me a signal that the romance is probably not going to be a serious part of the story. Often this becomes an harem story or a story with an far too oblivious mc and those storylines are rarely written in such a way that it doesn't result in ridicule of how fake it feels. And even if it is done for comedic reasons the comedy is not that effective because the romance already feels fake (don't get me wrong it can be done and I have read 1 story that did the harem part well and 1 other story which did the oblivious part well but it is very rare). I like it more when the romance is more build up, even if it is an harem story, and the females not getting a dumb reaction or no reaction at all when they very obviously flirt with the main character. In general I believe that if romance is to be part of a story than let it mean something to the story and don't paste it on just for comedic effect.For now I have seen enough positives to keep reading but at the same time I am weary because I have already seen behavior in the story that usually turns into the stories that I don't like. They are just signals now and I hope they don't turn in the things that make the great idea behind this story turn into the sort of story that there are already too many of.
Webnovel pick good novel for trial read and literally choose the worst one in the bin to approve. Who the **** approve this novels? Why always pick the least viable ones to earn coins and the most likely to be dropped?. Seriously someone should get fired. It is a really waste of money.
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I read until the first 15 chapters cause i couldn‘t handle it anymore. The writing is all over the place. Much happens but you can only really understand some parts cause the situations aren‘t really well explained. New progress to the story isn‘t slowly introduced but as a reader you just get thrown into it. *** for Author***In my opinion the idea of the story is great and has a very good potential. The only part thats bugs me is the writing style or the absence of any good structure in the chapters. The chapters only have a really rough structure like Beginning -> Action -> End of situation. Adding introductions or background information for new appearing characters or any real introduction for the story would probably be a good idea. There are almost no descriptions so the Tempo of the story is far to fast to get into it. And if there are descriptions they are all over the place and not really good integrated.As a reader I get the feeling that the beginning of the story is just written down without further thinking to get it to a point where the real plot should start. So I‘m dropping it since if I can‘t get into the beginning of the story there won‘t be a chance for the rest of the story.
this title remind me of "I own a virtual universe
The chapters miss the flow between them and there's no proper development of plot. the cartel seems to change from beginning ch 1 to ch 30 in a large manner (also same with the personality of mc after only five days).
Already from the beginning, we are learning that Touma Daido is something special. Characters are simple and fun off the bat plus super exciting. Also I amazed the author knows Silat which is good for me since I live in Brunei and Silat is very competitive xD
And now we're talking about detectives. I LOVE DETECTIVES. This should be worth more than a thousand reads! The writing on the synopsis alone is very well written. But I hope the chapters will be balanced—solving cases and well, romance. Continue writing, author!!
This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets.