Yo one of my fav authors every book of this dude is peak
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This really is a good novel, a mixture of reality and fantasy with some western elements. I enjoy how the MC is a “non-human” which is something I always enjoy. The writing quality is great and I can’t find many serious mistakes, although there are a few barely noticeable ones. The update schedule is beautiful, with a chapter a day(which is quite tiring to do if you run out of back up chapters, so +108 Respect)The world background is still a bit confusing to me but I believe it will be easier to understand as I keep readingThe character and story is also great. With Danika being fun to follow on her adventure.Of course if I needed to give a complaint, it is that not a lot of people have notice this novel yet, what is up with that?I hope you keep doing a great job author and I unfortunately can’t say anything to help you improve since your skills are much better than mine? I wish you good luck
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This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all. It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in. The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story. Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.
HOLY CR*P, this is F*cking realistic noise bro but althougth im still at chap 2 it's really nice and realistic gotta make sure you did your reaserch too bro good luck too!
Its really funny and amusing to read!!!! The game elements are pretty cool and the jokes made are amazing.
Amazing stuff, I cant wait for the author to finish this series. I hope it gets a manhwa adaptation. 10/10, would recommend. Absolutely one of the best VR MMO novels that I've read, the characters are funny, the story so far has been super interesting and it has a very lite vibe to it
Since this is the 10th review, I suppose I should be giving myself one in order to finally show the ratings.This novel is inspired by the games that I have played in the past such as Dragon Age, Skyrim, Kingdom of Amalur, Neverwinter Nights, and other RPG games. If you fellas are looking for an RPG based story where the MC progresses systematically in a fantasy-driven world, then be my guest and read my story. Most importantly, I hope you fellas enjoy!!
Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least. Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story.Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job!Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing.Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author.Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
Absolutely terrible story dude doesn’t even start cultivating in a cultivation novel until chapter 50 something Author makes the MC dumb and he litterly acts like a 5 year old. Author gives characters power that they shouldn’t even have with there status and honestly doesn’t explain have the **** that goes on if you read this you will lose brain cells I tried to read through it but it’s soo bad don’t do what I did and continue on
The beginning was good, but when characters from the MC's past started to appear the story became confusing, it seems that I skipped book 1 and started directly in the book 2 because many characters from the MC's past appear quickly and without much explanation about them.The MC doesn't really feel like a mage, he just seems like a cultivator focused on spells rather than weapons and that point spoiled the novel for me.The author had a great idea but failed to execute.