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please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc
This book is really just amazing I find the plot and the storyline very interesting it seems as the book goes along it just becomes even more fascinating
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As of Chapter 49
Writing Quality: 5/5
No visible mistakes were seen. (My english might not be the best so take it with a pinch of salt all you grammer nazis)
Story Development: 5/5
A relatively light hearted story in my own opinion. This story has a theme seen by most light novel readers. However, the light heartedness of the story carries teally nicely despite there being a little gore in some areas. A relatively easy read.
Character Design: 3/5
A typical aloof MC. There is nothing out of the ordinary about the MC so far. However, the MC stays true to his role and does not do anything out of character thus far. (OP and aloof MC). Not much is seen in the side characters as there is little to no depth in them. They feel very surface level (if you get what i mean).
Updating Stability: 5/5
I jist binge all 48 chapters so i am assuming that this novel has daily releases.
World Background: 3/5
A typical chinese fantasy theme as a world background. Nothing outstanding seen so far.
Overall: 4.2/5
I would consider this a novel to pick up and run with. There seems to be alot of potential in this novel. However, this novel is fairly light hearted and not for those who enjoy grimdark. This novel can be considered more of a easy read type novel. The main issue with this novel (why it has a low score) is due to the lack of chapters which will be solved in the future. Will do a future review once there are more chapters
First the were 60 chapters it was awesome then decreased to 5books with 40 chapters we tolerated and continued to critique and read our hearts out then decreased to 4 books with 40 chapters we continued to read but now you've done it not only did u release one book that looks boring.
Do u want to incur the wrath of readers?
I am really enjoying this reading. I like the special environment the author has created in this novel. It is really satisfing. I hope it will still entice my imagination. As for now, i really hope it gets more recognition. You earned it !
If Sprit cultivation was a B grage, then Against Heaven's Will was a A+ and this right here Avtar Online is a masterpiece with a rank of S.
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Great book, great writing and superb character development. The journey we experience along with the MC from the baby arc in the beginning through the academy arc. The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. We experience the MC gradually develop into what is considered a healthy and fulfilled person while also searching for meaning to his existence. 5 stars all day long
There are few showbiz-centered novels out there that are not Yaoi. There are even fewer that I would actually say are good. This is definitely seeming like it's going to be one of the best. I hope it gets to have long chapter list in the future since the current 30+ chapters feel like an appetizer to a great full course dinner. Cheers!
Tbh, you better reading a mtl then reading this sh1t of a novel. The grammar of this piece of garbage is 5x worse than a mtl!!!!! I'm speechless like never before. You know, I'm one of those people who is capable at reading mtl novels and for people who capable at reading mtl says a novel grammar/quality is worse than an mtl is one h'ell of a statement.
Honestly hilarious but Tycon did Bazra a little too dirty like way too dirty I genuinely felt bad for the guy instead of being able to just laugh at it after a while other than that this story is damn good