JBFIRE_77
Dont bother reading this book. After 40 chapter its just mtl.
Not bad but the sign in thing is overdone now and so is the cross dressing love interest thing.
Review at 120 chapters: Overall, this novel is pretty good. The pacing of his power increases, the characters, and the other general things are nice. The biggest issue I'm having which is making me take this novel slow is that the MC has absolutely no real goal. I can't anything more because it will spoil it but, because of this point, it's makes many things lack intensity or depth of meaning. I'll keep reading because the novel is definitely enjoyable but I hope this changes soon enough.
Translation top notch as always. But unfortunately translating a novel that is absolutely horrible.
If you don't want to waste your time then I would suggest not reading this.
Firstly,
I feel like instead of constantly changing the plot direction the author should have made it in a way that he progresses towards the goal while forwarding his romantic life but there has to be a balance or else the plot will just be all over the place, because if it was like that then he would have been able to purchase the grandmaster realm skill instead of buying skills he could earn.
Secondly
The writing was sub-par not saying I can do better, but I feel like there is room for improvement
So all this is was leaves you with a 4.4 star review
I like the MC desire to fight against all odds for the a destiny that's rightfully his. GD
A good read, mmorpg novels are one of my favorite genres, if you like it too, you should give this novel a chance. I think it has the potential to be a excellent novel. As I have said in a comment, maybe you should read RSSG, if you haven't yet, to get some inspiration.
Story seems super interesting and what makes it better is tha you used POV in a video game genre game! Really curious how will this story continue
Great job author
Im not done reading the 1st chapter when I read that the MC (MC is Main Char right?? Thats what always I think when I see MC) has a duaghter I feel this be a good novel well please keep up the good work..
You gotta restructure your first few chapters or something, because the entire time I’m reading this, it feels like he’s sharing his girl with his friend.
Hey guys. Author speaking. I am extremely sorry for not giving updates for the past few months. I've just been very busy. But I should be back again in a few more weeks. Thank you. Please don't forget to leave your comments so that I may know your thoughts on the book and I may be able to improve it. Once again, Thank you.
Damn, this sure gave me tense man. I feel sorry for reyhansh that he deal with his bad unlucky life.
Anyway i hope rin would be reyansh's bf someday
