I had fun reading this and i love it! Would it be possible if you would continue writing because I want more!
so far the story is good. It reminds me of Harry Potter, with all the magic and creatures. The story development is good, there is always something, whether it be a new spell or scenario and it has a bit of mystery too with all the weird magic and families. I just hope that the story remains revolved around the bookstore.In the end the story has a lot of potential and if you liked Harry Potter than this is the story for you
Alright, shamelessly putting a 5 star review. If you liked my story, i hope that you will review it and add to your library. This is my first story, and i know it has flaws.
I have planned for more chapters. Will write and post them periodically.
Thank you.
I usually don't review or comment, but
I read the novel until 735 and I have to say the novel is trash.
The mc hasn’t developed at all. Honestly feels like he got worse, and I’m losing brain cells from reading this.
The romance feels like “my three wives are beautiful vampires” but 20 times worse.
Some side characters are also okay, but the
The main characters are poorly designed and dumb af.
The only good factor throughout the novel is the system and the cultivation system.
Only read this far cause people said mc developed, but imma let you know that he didn’t develop at all.
But at the end of the day, it's my opinion, you can try it out yourself.
Mmm, Well the story is interesting, but I still think it needs some development in some areas. I will wait till it has more chapters.
I wanted to like this novel, and I love the premise, but the MC is too much, he has less character than a snail, less intelligence than a new born bird, less creativity than a vegetative patient, less ambition than a dead frog. He is literally god, yet can't do anything. His powers are wasted on him, and he is too worried on being humanity's saviour with his hero complex than actually working towards his goals, growth or his mission. Thew author is so against edgy MCs he even have the MC say he didn't want to be like the novel's MC which is fine, but instead of doing that, he goes all the way to the other side and become a sucker, he is more worried about improving others lives than enjoying his own life and it gets boring to read him waste his time and abilities thinking how to make philanthropy instead of advancing his cause. With his powers the only thing stopping him of conquering the world in one day and winning the game, is the time it takes for his troops to march, yet, do nothing in his two acres plot not even improve the construction of facilities in his land after the first day.-
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This book has a lot of potential, The MC isn't conceited, show-off, or generic progatonist. He's patient and carefree, which emphasizes the humor behind his naivety. Haven't encountered face slapping scenes or other cliche events yet. It's quiet fun and refreshing to read, the MC's nonsense are pretty humorous and also characters' confusion and helplessness toward MC.
I LOVE IT, as soon as i started reading it I was engrossed into It, I can’t wait for a new chapter to come out, Keep going and good luck! :)
You need to improve your grammar as it really ruins the story. The character is way too open with his abilities and your transitions aren't the smoothest. The story is alright but you should probably lay out more information about the current world the MC lives in.
I want to invent a time machine to go back in time to make a lot of money, catch the author and put him on a chain forcing him to produce 10 chapters a day ))
Do not read some dumb novel written by a dumb ero fanatic all em novels of the 70's are way better...plus he sure jokes with he eyes a lot .. the name z sure cliche buh the novel z dumb...it's just hypnotize and bang his sis, his boss, mum