An excellent novel.
The Author is an exceptional writer, and this story is a piece of art.
The story starts off with character building and a suspenseful plot. The beautiful narrative continues on and builds a fascinating world. The most wonderful aspect of the story is that there is always something new with rich descriptions and vivid imagery. There is a sad undertone to the story, but it definitely helps in highlighting the happy occasions making them more real and easy to connect to.
Grammar wise it is almost perfect and possibly one of the best works in WN.
I think the most wonderful aspect of this novel is the character building. The MC is just wonderful; he is described very well and the backstories bring life to him making him seem very real. Not only is the MC well described, but so are the side characters. The dialogue between the characters flow smoothly and really highlight their personalities. Reading the story will make you feel that you have been introduced to a diverse cast of characters.
Overall, it is a wonderful read and a definite recommendation, the authors, including me, can definitely learn from the meticulous writing and the readers can have a wonderful experience reading this piece of work.
Recommendations - for the auxiliary chapter in clarification and explanation, I think you should add "(possible spoilers)" to the title as some extra information is revealed there. My personal opinion is not to leave the great side chapters in the auxiliary section but to add them to the story and just title them side chapter/ side stories.
And, of course, it is added to my library to finish reading!
A dual cultivation sign-in novel.... could be interesting, but will depend on how much work the other puts into thr story development. Will give it thr benefit of the doubt and hope it gets picked.
Interesting novel. The armor plot is also amazing. I like the way MC is introduced in this novel.
Although he is thr reincarnation of a mighty figure, he don't have any memories of his past life. the Infinity symbol slowly let him experience his past life. The appearance of the mysterious lady was the thing that caught my attention the most. what exactly is the relationship between the mysterious lady and MC?
the jumps in the story were a little hard to follow and it feels like the author makes jumps and assumptions about what the reader knows far to often but the richness of the characters and the back ground development while being spotty and hard to follow really carry this story
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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la historia es buena, apenas van 40 caps pero tiene buena trama, solo que se exagero un poco con lo de "basura" ,pero en general la historia proemte, sigue con el buen trabajo
Tbh I cant grab system...But this novel really has unique plot. Rhe writing tells itself how beautifully the author has given his interest to this plot. More power to you. Best of luck in advance
Should be rated 0. Mc is a pedophile. He “fell in love” with his student. Absolute buffoon and weirdo of an author. Should be ashamed
Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!