I bet that this novel won't get picked.
But if it is, I will be pleasantly surprised that the staff at Webnovel can finally make slightly more logical choices and not pick utter rubbish for short term gains.
Haha, who am I kidding. This novel will not get picked. Time to go dumpster diving again...
Something intriguing...it's like as if a bubble is about to burst . Would like more information about Luke and his background. Why does he consider himself unlucky .
Nate is cool
Love the story, awsome plot and mechanics. Hope the novel will go premium and update daily. It's a little shame that the novel not updated daily
First, let's start of by saying the first 5 "chapters" are info and stats, and those count in the 39 free chapters we are supposed to have, so basically we have 35 free chapters. Out of those 35 I read 15 because the translation is pretty bad. On some parts it is still readable but slightly annoying, the other parts feel like an edited MTL novel. Meaning that some parts don't make any sense.
I would like and reccomend this novel if the translation was better.
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
IT'S F*CKING GREAT...
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This book was suprising for a genre that often dissapoints. The writer clearly has a talent, and the scenes are fast paced and fluid. the only issue I have is sometimes details are over looked (girl is shot - author doesnt tell us her body slum** to the floor), and I felt that at times the wording can be confusing. Apart from that bravo, clearly a talented writer with a knack for the job, can't wait to read more
I would really appreciate the way how the Author describes the plot alongside the characters- it's kind of an unique thing indeed, to be said.
Furthermore- the story has a clear picturing of events happening, so readers won't find it failing their craves.
Overall- it's a good and nicely written piece of work, just needs the author to re-visit and re-edit the initial chapters- making it more grammatically perfect![img=update]
Don't mind the stars, read the review.
This novel is the third novel of the Eternal Series. It is a sci-fi cultivation, virtual world, novel filled with countless treasure and monster hunts.
This novel doesn't include a harem, and it is Power Couple-based novel. The main character seems mature but he is not. This novel will include Eastern plus Western myths with hundreds of sci-fi hypotheses.
Everything in this novel is fictional, so don't compare it with the outside world, even if it is real.
I'll re-write another review after two volumes. And even if you find it uninteresting in earlier chapters, give it a try until it's free. You might change your view.
I like the way you write things out. I enjoyed everything while I was reading and the story itself seems pretty interesting. Keep them coming, I'm sure this story will do very well.
This is really good! I am in love with the story plot and characters! I hope to see more updates in the future. Added to library. More power author!
Amazing !!!
The MC didn't even know he was in another world and he was already facing a dangerous situation.
I only read chapter 2, and from it, I know the story has great potential[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm glad someone said the Summary was wrong cause first think in the book on like the first line us talking about a guy and I'm like "Didn't it talk about a girl?"