The premise of the story is good, keep up the good work author! Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression.
I am here why?? Because I can relate with the name of the book. "All time marksman."?? As a player who can only play marksman I feel like I can sympathize with the Mc?. And the cover is lit and welp although there few problems here there, not too big thing to fret on..Even though I am reading it to get idea about action and all, I am enjoying it quite a bit...hmmm..I must say..??it was a nice read..
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Very interesting. seems like a good novel, it has nice storyline with a good flow??????????????????????????????
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It seems interesting I've not read it yet tho just read the first and last part(I justwantspoiler) chapters and I'm hook and confused anyway I've got to read this next to my list cuz my hands are full I added you on my library (Add more Chapters tho Please) idk?
For such a joking novel, there sure are a lot of powerful moments… It’s odd, I’ve laughed at this many, many times, yet at the same time, it’s still so POWERFUL. This novel makes me actually FEEL for the characters, and that is the sign of an incredible book. When you laugh at character’s antics and cry at their deaths. I can truly believe these are real people, they have so much personality. We don’t even know the majority of their names, and yet we can connect with them and understand them. Thank you for writing this, it is incredible, and I’m glad that I found it.
I enjoyed it well, the idea of having Alexander in your fictional world is quite interesting and fun. I somehow started it with a serious face and ended up laughing , and wanting to read more. Overall a very nice story. keep it up.
Overall the story is pretty generic but not necessarily bad. It's really the characters that are bad.
The MC is supposed to have some sort of pro gamer background but from the start he never acts like that. Somehow he gets instantly dumb then gets a stereotypical snarky Fairy who is supposed to be a guide. The two of them combined are too annoying to continue reading.
Yeah I just tried to read through but every time I read it just gets harder to read, random 4th wall breaks or ranting about thinks I haven't even seen others comment on.
Random powers even though none of them are needed dude becomes a sword master but can barely describe what a sword even looks like. Imma be honest only started reading cause Fubiki but its not even Fubiki its a transmigrater in Fubiki.
He hides powers for the plot... all that. In my eyes the translation isn't terrible but it gets harder and harder to read is you get further in. And it just follows the stroy without much change, which is boring but I don't blame the author for it.