Really good story!
goog so far
This is the first book I have written on goodnovel and it is one of my favorite works. I’m not good at English but I put effort into this story. Hope you like it and ignore some grammar mistakes I’m trying to fix. I know the grammar of my novel is weak, but I hope you can still try to read my story.
not a very interesting story. plot holes. the premises sounded intriguing in the description, but the story fails to deliver a cohesive structure in an engaging manner. by the time chapter 20 comes around the same daily situation and main character interactions have just been rinse and repeat.
love the beginning... please update more
Interesting, neatly written, hot from the first chapter
When The demetris are came before Varguaz was no where around to help her. In fact he lets her get carved like a thanksgiving turkey. Now we found elixir be he needs Amelia to back the shield why?
BEST BOOK EVER. Came here after Inkitt. Love you.
Poorly written, I'd even childish. Story idea might be alright, but I can't get past the bad grammar and awful punctuation...Save your money until the author takes the time to properly edit and better develop her stories.
Nice setory :)
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loved it, can't wait for the sequel