This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh feeling.Continue the good work author.
A very exiting and intriguing start! This novel has already gotten me hooked and looking forward to how the story progresses and new characters get introduced!!! Love your work
This is a great story, very interesting unique idea. Hope author keeps on writing this story. Story is quite emotional and just insanely good overall.
Writing quality wasn't bad so far for me. World background has some interesting elements that make you continue to read it. Especially the identity of great martial God Luo. Character development feels kinda rushed. Characters grow up far too quickly than you can comprehend their personalities. The author does not give powers to the mc without a reason, but the mc gets powers so quickly that you can feel soon the powerful foes won't be enough, that's why he will need to find another opponents (that there aren't left in his current world). Also the time skip makes it obvious and it gives away the plot a little before hand, but it does not affect overall story.Mc isn't attracted to any female so far (200+) but there's something going on with hue the black fox, she is interested in one of the mc's daughters, which made me frown. I'm not a fan of this sort of concept, especially when the mc still doesn't have anyone he loves. If the black fox's love adventure gets far with the mc's daughter, i don't think i will be able to make it to the end.Sorry if there are misspelled words.
has good potential, but MC too overly prideful. doesn't want to accept help, assistance, advice, suggestions of ANYONE, but wants people to accept his help and tutorage.
I don't understand the part about the energy bars cause shouldn't everyone have access to the heavenly dao thing and a lot of people should know about it. Just asking.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 13.76millionRating : 8.5(187)Chapters : 1358Status : ongoingWord count : 3.89millionauthor level : great No of works : 5Comments : 4175Year started : 2017Chinese title : 无上崛起
As many have said, the concept is interesting and the story starts reasonably, but it continues to go downhill as the story progresses. Contrived and generic.
The Fuck???????Cant understand **** here .... sometimes its he sometimes its she or at the beginning i found a boyfriend and my girlfriends name is ...WTF!!!!!learn at least not to confound the genders all the fucking TIME!!!!and the overall this novel is TRASH..........................................................................
es una historia buena e interesante espero ver que si la traducen porque veo varias similares pero no las eligen y al final no la traducen y son muy buenas como esta
The synopsis is interesting, I like the whole idea of mundane items with OP abilities, so I hope this gets picked.Btw, does anyone know of similiar novels with that concept?
I really liked the story before Rebecajust killed him twice and made him a slaveAlso I don't understand his god complex as he is just getting thrashed by the willburns and when will he kill Kira?these chapters are just him slaving for rebbaca and simping for Kira.i will still read it but I'm disappointed