Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3
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I don't know who you are or where you are but out of manyyy webnovels that I have read this one is piece of art the story Is awesome and the sense of mystery and interconnectivity of characters it's fabulous
So ive only read until ch 40, so take that as you may.So i imagine everyone has already read about how its a DnD type book, does it break immersion, not really... So its alright. I feel it only breaks immersion if u didnt get pased the first ch, cause after then u realize its a simple dynamic between the charcater, the ai, the world, and the story telling.The story is very complex, with a clearly developed lore that i dont know cause idk Cthulu lore ... I dont hate it for that though.Also it isnt a simple game thing, (spoiler alert) the monsters are real, like the game is prob in an alternate dimension or something.And it seems the real world is cool too, but i havent gotten any explanation at all!!!!And the mc seems connected to a family related to these monsters, not alot of bg on that yet. So the Ai or whatever is a ***** like all the time,k so thats super annoying.And the text b/c of the lore and the dnd type jargon is make its hard to read, especially in the beginning. But it isnt that important. Just know that his firsy mission spawned in real life cause he failed in it.Pron for me is that the game is too luck based, annoyingly so, and it penalizes u for using an outside skill, like the mc for knowing latin and knowing the lore. It basicallt doesnt really allow u to prepare outaide of the game.But yeah the game seems to have different modes thay j dont understand yet( and if there arent other modes, it just proves my point in how confusing it is)And it seems this game came about mysteriously, like it poped outnof nowhere, and unrealistically became known by alot of people but not necessarily have a huge following base, idk it isnt explained wel. Cause it seems like its a new game, but soooo many people seems to have played it for a while ? Plot hole, bad story writting, or my misunderstanding ... Idk.TldrIts really not bad, might be a great story, crazy lore, the world seems very cool as well, its still very hard to read bc of the game lore, game jargon, and world jargon that isnt explained at all, and the game seems booty luck demanding, hard to understand at first, and the ai is an annoying ass.
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pick me ,pick me , pick me up, pick me,pick me, pick me up i want you pick this up. realy just pick this one.its great novel.far away from usual cliche novel.
The book brings forth the emotion of the MC. The character development, dialogue, description are well done. Intriguing, captivating........ Hmmm Love it ?????????????
Well I read raw everything is good until his supposed future wife decided to trick him and take his half sister wife to upper realm and mc I mad because he doesn't even know she got her emotions erased and and his other wife also knows about that technique but doesn't bother to tell him and due to impatient when he will found out I started skipping chapters at the end I don't know how many chapters I skipped hoping to know well I no longer can know because I already lost the fun and point of story so I dropped it
so far it is a really good story I like it a lot I hope that there is more chapter to come later on people should read this novel even though is only 4 chapter long it have good description about what going on and the story progressive on a normal pace not to fast and not to slow
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It is slow at the early chapters but because of it, the author succesfully introduced our MC, World and the MC's powers. It has a very interesting concept because even though Zerg (Zergs is a playable race in an RTS game called Starcraft; they basically rely on their fast reproduction,huge numbers and fast evolution and they are also insects) Fanfictions are not rare, you can only find a good one once in a while and this novel I think will slowly steer into that direction. (I hope so)
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