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The storyline was made very well, especially the story of the ml who fights for his life, has self-development and is eager to gain more knowledge all the time. I really like this character and want to watch him grow up. So, I'll wait to see his progression. Keep fighting, Bai Zhe!!
Honestly I don't know where to start with this Novel, it's really well written, the power system is great, the characters are great each with their own unique personality, overall its just brilliant.I'm currently only 298 chapters in but this book brought me out of my slump in terms of Novels. I got to the point where I'd read everything I considered worth reading and couldn't find anything else, but this Novel hit the spot.To start with the Characters, each of them has quite a unique personality with specific traits that kind of define them as a person. Overall they're all done really impressively, each character being vastly different with even each relatively minor villain or antagonist having their own quirks.In terms of the Power System, so far it's brilliant, I won't go into so as not to spoil it, but it's done very well and its also quite simple which to my surprise made the power system and scaling characters alot easier and therefore I found it more enjoyable.In terms of the main character, so far he's been quite a fun MC to read about, he's not overly Heroic but still caring and yet he isn't outright good or outright evil in my opinion, a perfect balance for a character, I'm not really a big fan of the whole 'hiding your true power and living as an extra' trope, but I have to say the way it's portrayed in this novel far exceeded my expectations.For story development I find it to be a bit slow for my liking, however it dosent really bring the story down at all as the MCs power still grows at a fast pace, and so does his character providing some very well done character development.
One of the best action story that cuts across the world. This is the best clandestine operation stories. You better get your copy and read soon. Enjoy
Espero continúes con esta historia, el trama se lee interesante, de todo corazón éxitos, mi voto es para ti.
I still havent read your story yet but for a good synopsis i will give you a high five star rating. . . ..
Well, what can i say, everything is good so far, just waiting for more chap~ hehehe and INCEST IS WINCEST BABY!!! Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~ Nice~
There were numerous punctuation mistakes which made it hard to understand and decreased the speed of reading the text. But, the concept was quite interesting. I also like the cover.
interestingthe way to defeat monster in dungeon interesting. not just hit and killthe dungeon more like puzzle tipe dungeon ?its probably temporary. hopefully the novel not go to full kill type novel in more chapter
Look, this story is very hard to read from the get go. At the time I started writing this, I stopped fairly short into trying to read it sure to a lack of punctuation in sentences making it next to impossible to read. Honestly, I think I saw a single comma at the point I couldn't keep going from. If you ever get to editing it with appropriate punctuation I wouldn't mind trying again.
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The story has an interesting concept and I can say it is a unique concept as a fantasy reader. The characters have nice characteristics and the dialogues embodies their character. Overall, a GREAT story??.
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