Pretty interesting story. It's a sci-fi type story full of war of despair. I will keep this story in my library.
Still the author is still new but he is slowly improving.
There some issues but overall a good story
U have written a very gud novel,I like your story describing style,I wish u a very very gud luck please continue writing novel it was very interesting
MC was confusing, with several personality shifts that didn’t seem to fit with his stated goals. Up to Ch 40 (when free stopped), it was more like a low-product, poorly managed store than anything like a bank. Banks do not keep reinvesting everything they have in the next deal. Thankfully, when MC got a money-equivalent he held onto a portion of it.I will not even burn passes on this beyond 40, not to mention coins better spent elsewhere
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Good Story. Need more update. update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.update.
This is good. No, scratch that. This is great! I wont lie, ive always like a good detective story. what i got so far, shows a lot of promise. Im definitely adding this to my reading list.
Never before has a book made me feel the need to write a review, however this one is different. The writing quality is excellent, surpassing the best Qidian has to offer and is up at the top with the likes of Supreme Magus and The Lord of the Mysteries (it’s been a long time since I’ve had to look up the definition of a word and it is an exciting prospect with this book). The story/world building is intriguing, reminiscent of Terror Infinity in premise but with its own uniqueness which makes it captivating to read. The characters are interesting as the author does his/her best to replicate all the human intricacies. I hope that this review will serve as encouragement for the author and other readers to persevere with this story; the only reason it is not in the top 15 is because not many know of it (surpasses plenty of the garbage up there like My Vampire System for example). I hope you continue to write this book author, for my sake lol.
I am so disappointed. This is so good novel yet no one bothers to read it, appreciate it. So less views.....The novel here is kinda new for me though i have read hundreds of novels... it is refreshing, realistic but kinda dark. So much happens to a 7 year old kid. His father abandons him while escaping enemies thinking since he is a child they wont kill him as he would have an advantage as a hostage, also he doesnt know any secrets. He gets betrayed by his caretaker who is a spy. He gets roughed up every now and then, badly brutally beaten up, life on the edge..... never has happy moments... used by others like a pawn... All this happening to him when he is only 7 yrs old, currently 10 yrs.....Writing quality is good, very less errors. story development is awesome but kinda dark and realistic, updates are a little irregular.... MC is a kid, a runt, betrayed, wants to prove himself.... his personality is acceptable coz he was sheltered kid for 6 yrs and then suddenly all the ugliness is thrown to him though he acts too tough for a kid....Other characters are also realistic with each having own sad back story. Not much is known about world background but from what i read looks like it will be epic and i guess it will war on god level if this book continues.I hope people appreciate this work coz it really is very good. Hope author keeps writing more frequently and regularly