"Feh, and here I thought I could order the Hakurei Maiden whatever I want, but look what happened now." said Remilia grumpily. "Next." motion Remilia with her hand for her servant to prepare the next set of straw.
Tora felt too embarrassed at the thought of changing in front of a person that she did not know very well.
Es regnete. Leon schaute besorgt hinaus auf die dunklen Regenwolken, die über der Stadt hingen. In letzter Zeit war er sich nicht mehr so sicher gewesen, ob all das, was er immer wollte, auch so richtig ist, wie Sie es machten. Behände zog er sich seinen Kapuzenmantel über und huschte durch den Ausgang hinaus in den Regen. Leon hatte sich abendliche Spaziergänge schon vor zwei Jahren angewöhnt um sich seinen Gedanken zu stellen und um diese zu sortieren.
For the lower body, the man wore stone scale-like pants that had a weird pattern that I had no way of deciphering.
It was dark, too dark. Sakura tried to move out off the fetal position she was in but found it hard to breathe. She was wrapped in something soft but black haze was seeping into her space. With all the strength she could muster she tried to straighten her body out but it was no use. She felt her breathing was becoming more shallow as time went on, her eyes started to lose light as they became empty and she was ready to surrender herself to the darkness.
We continued finding the Goblin King along with the Other monster that lurks here, but even after three hours of searching there's still no sign of the monster which made us stop for a while and made a temporary camp in the middle of the woods, we let the horse rest for a while.
Jens : "So you don't know anything about the Endbringers?"
"School is boring and the only redeeming thing are the people and teachers there" - Lin Fan
I can say that I enjoy novels that not only focus on developing the main character (MC) but also invest in the growth of other characters. The author assigns a significant role to each character. Not all conflicts with main villains are resolved by the MC, which provides a clear sense of power balance within the story. Unlike most fantasy hero stories, where the MC, starting as a low-class character, inevitably triumphs over higher-class adversaries through plot armor, this novel is different. The disparity in strength between class E and class SS is distinctly portrayed. I appreciate the character interactions in the novel and believe the author excels at world-building. By introducing the main villain early on, it's evident that the author has a clear vision for the story's future. The main villain is intriguing as well. In some instances, the author executes plot twists effectively, though there are times when twists seem to be included for shock value without proper development or foreshadowing. Additionally, I find that the MC's rival, initially portrayed as strategic and intelligent, evolves into a muscle brain character, suggesting that the author may have changed his/her approach to the rival's character. The same is true for some other characters, who appear to deviate from their initial portrayal, almost as if they have become different characters later. Overall, the story is about an MC who transmigrates into an extra student that was originally only can achieve C class power and could not develop further. As an orphan, the original MC was a dungeon seeker who gave up on seeking revenge against the main villain, who is the crown demon prince, due to the vast disparity in power. But in this new timeline, having gained knowledge of the future before transmigrating, the MC chooses to seek power and revenge by taking some opportunities that originally belonged to the protagonist. The intent sword skill that the MC acquires causes him to lose his emotions, which worries both him and his lover. The original protagonist is revealed to be despicable and has actually used heavenly luck to destroy humanity itself. The real story is that the MC’s rival is the world’s will choosen one, which tries to counter the original protagonist but fails and dies. In the new timeline, the rival becomes a friend of the MC. Meanwhile, the original protagonist fails to gain power, and many character who have bad fate due original protagonist, have different fate due MC intervene. I can say that this novel is a blend of modern hero and dungeon fantasy, infused with elements of cultivation from Chinese novels.
Can see that author is isn't that familiar with writing but can already see the potential of the storyline, intruding story telling from the start!
I’ll be cheering you on for your WSA entry, as I can see the potential in this lore. The prologue provides a clear direction and a fine briefing on what to expect from the ‘peak’ experts of this world. The words are easy to interpret, concise, and help the readers to grasp the settings of each scene without having to think too much. The information feedback is just as smooth with little fillers, especially when the characters are mentioned with little snippets of their past, present, and their expectations for the future. This is slowly building a web of information and connections, but if one isn’t careful enough and is simply reading for the sake of skimming through, it’s easy to be lost in the storytelling down the line.
Good story with the ancient harem setting. I love that characers are intelligent! No arrogant and braindead villians so far. MC is smart, beautiful and decisive woman and I look forward to her interaction with emepror.