Realized I haven’t even reviewed yet. I love stories like this. The MC so far is streaming while playing games and music , and his channel grows as the story goes along. Right now since he’s a kid , it seems like he’s learning new things with the help of his learning capabilities , and just enjoying life.MC is also very smart. He’s not stupid or cringe. His intelligence shows in most parts meaning he doesn’t just have a high IQ just because. He actually uses his brain.
Not a perfect score but based only on the typos which will affecting the reading experience in really simple way, I found many of these but should you read it, doesn't really cause major concern. The story on the other side has been planned out really detailed to the smallest things.This is a good book about character progression and how each character has their own personality which is a breath of fresh wind. The story has been progressing well and I noticed it's still the tip of the iceberg.
Very good idea and execution. I recommend this book highly. Please give it a try.
I'm not into it harem wakamoly thing coz he can bang everything, that's why it's not my thing, I just start reading and ill drop if not my taste
Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book? only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them
Just finished Chapter 47 and am current on the novel so I figured now would be a good time to submit this review. Idczhen has shown numerous times that he understands a great plot with amazing characters time and time again and Crowd Control is no exception! Please note that there are extremely minor spoilers ahead.Writing Quality: 4/5 - Zhen has improved LEAPS and BOUNDS compared to Luck is a Charm, but there are some minor tense issues that could have made a sentence flow better and be read easier. Besides this, the quality of writing in Crowd Control is definitely far above the average of any story on WN. Stability of Updates: 5/5 - Not taking into account the uh... hiatus, Zhen has always been consistent on his daily uploads. Nothing much to say here. Story Development: 5/5 - The futuristic world of Earth in 2089 in Crowd Control is your pretty standard and typical MMORPG setting; however, that is pretty much where the comparisons end. The story so far is very interesting and compelling. Get in for a long haul, because this story is paced slow, but at the same time, the plot is strong, really drawing the reader in.Character Design: 5/5 - Lei Zhen, our MC, comes from pretty standard background, deceased parents, he's all on his own. His younger sister has been in a coma for a very long time and that is his drive. His role as a Crowd Controller is a unique class and very little is known. I am very interested to see how he will develop. The current supporting cast is extremely well developed. Relationships are already being tested and it is soo juicy and dramatic and I cannot wait!World Background: 5/5 - The game, Magnolia, takes an interesting approach toward the MMO genre. Having been the #1 VRMMORPG for the last 4 years, our MC is the first person to stumble upon the Main Story, completely changing the game as everyone knows it! The established lore is deep and Zhen has done an excellent job at creating unique spins for this wonderful virtual world. Don't take this to mean that he has ignored the futuristic 2089 either! The real world has been explored a decent amount at this current point as well. Overall: 4.8/5 - Crowd Control has everything that you hate to love, love to hate, and all the things you love to love! This is an excellently written novel with one of the best designed MMO game I've ever read about. The cast is diverse and still growing, each bringing great conversation and dynamic reactions on the entire app. This is absolutely a must read novel!
Utter ****-tier novel, full of cliche, trash protagonist and and antagonist, don't waste your time reading this novel, I don't even know why people even bother voting for this.
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I'm gonna copy paste someone's review from Comrademao(mtl). By:BigBroHasDrugsA world of endless seas, all the land has been submerged under the ocean ... humans now thrive in floating islands, fishing is not just for survival but also cultivation. The ocean is home to a vast amount of resources, and fishermen run to the sea risking their lives. the world seems simple at a glance. But is it truly just as its facade? The conspiracy looms over the world. This is a pure adventure cultivation novel. The world is definitely not as simple as it seems. Beyond the training fisheries under the control of towns and cities lies a vast uncharted grounds - the endless seas. Most of which remains obscure this novel is a box of secrets ... there are secrets and mysteries waiting to be uncovered . What happened 30 years ago, what happened in the distant past and how that affects the present and directs the future. The humor is well done, especially mc and his antics ...One of the best FML in a chinese novel so far, she is lively cute independent and dangerous. she may prolly be the only female lead who likes to attack mc for no reason at all ... (mc is a body refiner and his defence is op, the fml likes to puncture mc with her dagger) But can only pierce like an inch due to his op defence , she never gives up even after they become couple ... when mc asks why - she says because she likes how the dagger stabs the flesh. Both the MC and FML like fighting and robbing. The author has taken some inspirations from DD1, OP, etc> Use coins to unlock at least 1 chapter to be counted as 'Fans' so they'd be pick this up quicker.
Starts out good but goes downhill from there.First world is good he fights hard, he gives his all and he earns more because of it.after that its just relying on cheat and some past accumulations to grow.The use of his own resources is poor.Small spoilers after this point:He is a cancer scientist in his first life, and through that he learns how body, genes and all that work.but here we see that after that its as if he has no such knowledge at all, he becomes another cheat based fight and concur the world junkie.Then we are seeing by his third world he is starting to accumulate a harem as well.Just idiotism.Those who are new, kinda-new might like this, but those who have been reading a long time, this might not be that likable.
bro why are u not posting more chapter of this novel
[Reviewed on: 12-06-2021]GOOD POINTS:- Comical vibe through the chara of female demon/devil- MC is reasonably smart, not too dumb to cringe at all- The flow and pace is fine too- Apparently there are no issues in grammar [will explain further below]- Storyline somewhat resembles 'my pick up artist system' but no it's not a fanfic- MC has a goal to achieve or he will die- At first it gave me 'death note' vibe, then the devil felt a succubus to me as she emerged- It was entertaining~WEAKNESS:- Synopsis doesn't really tells what's inside, it should be more elaborative on the contract aspect- The initiative strategy in chapter 1 is extremely wrong- No one wants to read the routine of MC, his house, work, what he is wearing, food, etc- The narration is in personal/1st person but the repetition of 'I' is annoying, in about five lines 'i' is overly used seven times!- 1st chapter should have begun by the later half, the upper half is completely dump in my opinion. Since 2 and 3rd chapters are without fillers and absolutely good with hooks, while 1st [initial half] is a turn off.- Devil can read his mind but at places she doesn't respond to his thoughts, why?