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It's quite lengthy and will take patience to read. But its really in-depth with great action and a great MC. Something that I love about the MC is that she isn't the typical beauty. She is rather a gravelly older woman who is smart and a introvert that his smart and witty. but it stays entertaining. and despite being detailed and long, it is very easy to read.
well that is a good novela lot of suspense and stress and actionshope this novel will get higher than the rank 100it deserve to be thereand very good job from the translator to bring it upthank you :)
Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
