Ahri_Gumiho
I like the development between characters as well as the realistic conversations that not all novels would have paid much attention to. The MC is quite decent and likeable. Waiting for more chapters to be released!
Uhm does the background and class he choose remind me of other similar novel goes by the name martial gamer or it is different?i havent read much of this story just a couple so sory if it a mistake on my part
the tranlation's grammar is soooooo ????????????????????. But the story is really good. ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
So basically nerfed Meng Lei? lolololololol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well, its pretty good novel and we should at least have raw name..............................................................................................................................................................................................
i apologize for my 1st review sayin this is a funny but trash.if you only read till ch 60. yes it is funny to read but with weird direction.like the saying "curiosity killed the cat"im curious about where the story gonna go from ch60 so on.so i search for mtl site.and after i read until ch500i find this book become a gem.probably the author at beginning still cannot find direction, but from ch300 the story begin to pick up. so many sentiment in the story, so much feeling, and of course so many plagiarism lol.but the author can bring me to feel more emotion, a few chapters above ch500 makes me shed a little tears.but so great.since English not my main language, i don't really mind reading from mtl site.but others probably wont be comfortable reading there.and i hope this can continue.this is a gem, such a waste if this book burried because of the first 60chapters.
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A wonderful novel that I cant wait to read more. I am looking foward to the new updates that are coming in the future.????????????
This story has a very good potential. I`m adding this into my library. I hope you will release more chapters. Good luck.....................
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So Far i love the concept and development, i need to read more to see how it is, but if it is like the other Authors Fics then im sure it would be good, one of the few non harem novel and one of the original novels that probably doesn't have any unnecessary drama over the main Couple, not to mention its free unlike other original novels that doesn't worth the shot, so definitely you should give it a try
This is really good. The characters are pretty loveable, so I cant stop my imagination and think of all their future fun adventures together.
