ALISHA: HIS MAFIA LOVE

If you like stories WITHOUT logic, believable characters, and world development... You'll love this. For example : There are vampires who are nighthunters... But can't see in the dark. The same vamp can smell a girl through a locked door but can't find the MC when he's hiding. The very same vampire is so slow that when he's holding a girl's foot and about to kill her:1 the mc arrives. 2. The mc thinks what he should do, runs over to a lamp,  grabs the lamp and smashes it on the vampire. 3. The mc grabs the girl and runs away from the vampMakes me wonder how that stupid vampire race hasn't gone extinct already.

story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba

Great story and concepts fOr and interesting world. The definition of an overpowering main character but it is fun Vote for this to get picked

Is this going to have an evil mc that does not have any morals and would do anything for his benefit and would also kill and not fall in love with any "heavenly beauty" woman. Because if he is not this I will not read this.

Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.  Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.

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