nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation.hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality
good read ....…...........….It is on my reading list now .…...................…...................…......…...........…........…..............?
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I have been enjoying the book so far, unfortunately starting at chapter 61, the writing quality seems to have gotten a lot worse , hope in a few chapters it gets better again , will post a new review if it gets better !
I really loved the first chapter and the way of narration. I can feel you brother on parents walking on anime mishap scenes. Happened to me a lot of times and like seriously its easier to explain physics than anime.
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I have to say, this system is kinda funny sometimes, you can improve more than what you are doing. there are shorts chapters but I feel That you mean by doing so. Keep doing a good job my dear!
this is a masterpiece ?....................................................................................................................
After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating. 1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy. 2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake. 3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story. 4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever. Thanks for reading!
overall good novel but i see some similarities to a korean novel/manwha by the name memorize. Did you get the inspiration from that said novel?. i only read up to chap 4 and i enjoy it quite far... Cheers!
Good novel. Must read.
dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . .I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . .aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us?I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.