Ahri_Gumiho
Heading towards the kitchen Quaren opened the doors and to his surprise, he saw there a small girl sitting on a chair looking at him.
There is one
"I'm okay Emilia, honest, now what's the real reason you wanted to talk to me?" Aaron asked. A loud grumble shattered the tender moment, causing Emilia to shoot her gaze down at the floor with a blush. Aaron laughed, standing up to his full height, ignore the discomfort from his left calf.
Maria Eterna smiled " Yeah it can, you already read the token fuction right? it written
'Mel! Come back! You're okay now, we're here with you!' (Zack)
I haven't seen many gender benders lately. this one is done amazingly.But pls, pls, pls more chapters... The original is so far ahead... And I also need more to satiate my needs.
Overall the story wasn't bad however the whole story line has so many sentimental nonsense going on making it so cringeee that it makes me sick, the story was also too generic however it was still a bit balanced at some point so it's still fine I guess....but the whole romance of the story feels like it was written by some old virgin ...*no offense author peacee xD*I just didn't like the whole ‘sort of’ love at first sight related stuff..
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Well, I saw some good reviews on here so I decided to binge read the first 52 chapters. I stopped at 52 because I just seriously can’t take the bad grammar, the bizarre transitions from a past timeline from a new character from the future (that isn’t the Mc), and the bizarre use of side stories in other parts of the world that are clearly irrelevant for the short-medium term. I personally just want to follow the MC’s story since his whole setup seems cool and the route he can go is neat but it feels ruined by the side characters on other parts of the world. You’ve also got random yaoi stuff in it at parts and it’s just strange and out of place. I couldn’t care less about the other top tankers in the world, like just stick to the Mc. Idk, the story keeps going for another 300+ chapters so maybe it’s improved but man I just can’t read anymore. The bad grammar and the transition with no notice to a future/past timeline thing is so jarring. Especially when you don’t know who is talking at times. Sometimes Loki just says Prince over and over and it’s like, “Oh he means the MC. Why isn’t he even saying his name or saying Lord Shadow or Shadow?” It’s so confusing. Don’t waste your time tbh.
Nice story,simple read and very interesting
*Clears throat*This novel is great. I haven't read any of Aoki's novels but... I'm glad I stumbled upon this work.Everything is so unique and amazing, I love the way MC is playful and was not totally useless and weak at the beginning.
Loved the plot!The story is very interesting!Readers can get easily hooked to it!Great job Author-nim!Added to my collection permanently!
