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Super good
Wow! This is the first book I've read that is a reincarnated not a human but a goblin who will be the hero of the village. I'm looking forward to knowing more about this book. Highly recommended this book to my friends to read this. Good job author keep it up the good work!
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The story and world seem well thought out and interesting. The characters are a struggle to read. I keep stopping and doing something else for a while before coming back to this. I want to like it. I want to enjoy it because the premise is one I like and the world seems interesting. But I keep losing interest whenever I read character interactions. The language thing at the start is really cool. The wall/gate is interesting. I really like the fire dog fight. The premise of a mage in a cultivation world is a great one. I have read maybe three or four books that try to cover it and all were either cut short (Essence of Cultivation) or fell off (Dao of Magic).The MC and a potential FL are really our only two main characters in the first twenty chapters. The MC just feels off somehow. Disjointed. He has a lot going on and much of it feels like it doesn't have the emotional weight it should. The FL is painful to read. All the blushing, trembling, and other things she does rather than talking. This is a woman that is supposed to be out risking her life in battle, has gone through some apparently harsh life experiences, and she acts like a coy 4 year old who is also a well adjusted adult? I think the author is trying to run with the jade beauty cliche while also spicing it up/filling it out but again it just is not fun to read.I am glad I read it. I would encourage others to read it to see if they can get past the characters. But I won't be continuing from here.
I really love the story development it easy to understand I hope that more chapter Will be released soon am going to keep my eye for the update
Once again, another "I got a super op beast right from the start"MCs name has been changed to Mike, since WN has been changing tons of trial read names to western-ish names. For that I give it a low translation rating.Story development is that he gets maxed out charisma that only works on beasts. That's it. It was satisfying to read about John being eaten alive by bugs, but that's it.MC is a poor boy with a poor family, and he needs to carry them. Sounds exactly like that other novel that was on trial reads a few weeks ago where the MC was named "Link". Even the starting is pretty similar.OP Beast checkpoor family checkimmediate beast tide to show off beast, check.There's nothing that particularly stands out, the MC is a bit dumb, I would think that after a failed attempt at asking a girl on a date would make me question the charisma stat. If anything, if this world is filled with beasts, has he never approached a beast to see if his charisma worked? It only worked when he was choosing a pet? How does that work? How did that dragon sense him from who knows how far away and was attracted to him. Was none of the beasts in the city attracted to him? Big plot hole.
so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters
Good novel. I hope this novel has many readers and I also hope that the novelist can write until the last chapter or finish.
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anyone know the raw?
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just I usually don't mind grammar but when it's nearly every sentence I just can't
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Another trash trial novel.
Too many plot whole and nothing is consistent.
plus mc isn't the brightness of people.
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