It's average at best. The characters and the world are bland and uninspiring. MC is boring and two dimensional. The plot seems like something that has been done a million times before.
Read if you have read everything else on the site would not recommend.
No just No, when I read this it felt so bad to the point i would re-read the most boring book in the world than read this is he so dumb to the point where hes going to be a test subject or killed. I wouldnrsther trust a 5yr kid then him with a secret than thr MC,like who tells the family "oh im going to be really strong out of know where when I dont have no powers anx im really lazy , oh yes thats not wierd at all ok son thats good to know" like really in almost spit out my drink for reading that.
*this is just an opinion also the total rating is 1/5
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This story is a bit childish. Like, the reading level is a bit lower than normal. There's not enough "showing" and too much "telling". I don't get the feeling that this story is going to be particularly great. There are definitely better options out there. The MC isn't that great either.
More, please. The story and plot are very good. I like that Karma becomes mature as the chapter goes by, very nice detail there.
His teammates are trash though. But story is good.
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I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!
The story had potential, the writing quality was good and the MC was likable enough, but it progresses to fast. After a single day he gets into a meeting with the highest ranking people and they personally give him information he doesn’t really need to know at the moment and exposit their inner thoughts every chance they get merely because he is “trustworthy” and “good looking”. If he was alowed to develop and grow a little more without the plot rainning on us like artillery shells in WWII, it would be much more bearable read.
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I enjoyed the story very much. The grammar and lack of editing sometimes was very annoying, but the story was worth it to me.
I usually don’t make reviews but felt that I had to after reading this book. It’s still pretty new since it only has around 30 chapters, but it already got me hooked after reading the first chapter. The two main characters are refreshing and the chemistry between them is really good. The writing quality is one of the best on this site and from what I read so far this story will become even better as it progresses. I honestly feel that as long as the author doesn’t magically become worse at writing this can become one of the top novels on this site.