A warning to anyone reading this novel, this is plagiarism. The author has pretty much word for word copied the original story on royal road with the same exact title as well. Despite what the author may think, simply putting (fanfic)in the title, briefly mentioning that it is a fanfiction in the summary, and adding the original author's name does NOT make this any less of plagiarism. First off, the story is not listed as a fanfiction. As you can see by the tag, this is listed under the category of video games. What does this mean? It means that the author is able to make money by claiming this story as an original story under the webnovel system. Webnovel does not care if you briefly mention that this is a fanfiction in the summary or elsewhere, as long as you do not register it as a fanfiction, it will be considered an original novel. This author is stealing the work of another person, probably without permission, and even registering it as an original novel. Secondly, for something to be considered a fanfiction, it must adapt, modify, or change the original work in some way. Skyrim: Dragonborn Within along with many other stories on this site do this well, because only the setting is borrowed, not the entire story word for word. Even if the so called "author" of this story were to change the story later on, there is no need then to copy the beginning. He could ****** provide a link to the original story, and where his/her own story starts. In fact, they save themselves the time and effort need to copy and paste the original story, so unless the author is seeking to gain something for himself, there is no reason he/she cannot do this. A good example of this is the adaptation of mythran's "master of all." The adaptation starts where the original story was dropped, and the author even got permission from the original creator. If I were to try to publish the Harry Potter books, simply claiming that it is a fanfiction would not protect me at all from a copyright strike and possible charges. I can't just add one more book then publish the first seven or so books along with it saying "Well, it's a fanfiction so I haven't plagiarized." This is the same. Legally, you can get sued for this kind of action. It is also just morally wrong. Why would you try to claim someone else's work as your own? You can't get much money from this anyways, and you might as well write you own story if you want to be recognized. Leeching off of other's achievements is not the way to go. Also, the author has put a bunch of five star review for himself, because other people have recognized these points, and so the author must try to spam five star reviews for self-validation. If everyone else is giving you one star, the problem isn't with the other people, and the solution isn't to give yourself good reviews. The problem is you, and the solution is realizing your faults, and trying to change. All this leads me to believe that this author is a terrible person in general, and that any reader is better off finding some good, original, stories. If you're reading this review, you've already spent far too much time paying attention to this story and should move on.
You shameless cur. Dont steal works of other. Anyone rewding this just dont. Its not worth it. Original is availiable on royal road for free with more chapter too.
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this novel have some potentials , please don't drop it . wish u some luck mate ............................................................................
Really well done story the character is very unique I find as well as the story different from other system novels like how the power of the main characte has steadil increased over all really good. One down side the chapters are a little short but sines there’ a new chapter almost everyday makes up for it.
ok let me start by saying I like the idea and the fact there is not too much cliche that's a plus for me but the negative of this book is the fact that I can barely understand what is going on I seriously recommend getting an editor I tried reading it but it was tough like reading a mtl. so my review or constructive criticism is get an editor you need one bad but other than that I enjoyed the book
highly disappointed in the face that after chapter 67 you have to buy the whole novel at once and not use the fast passes. if it did have this it be 4.5 - 5 stars
Finally some mc that have brain who will train first hidden so he can be strong when facing the enemy not like other mc that will every to become what is the use of their op technique
funny skeleton man with skeleton
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Characters : 10/10✅
Plot : 10/10☑
Overall♥️♥️♥️♥️ 100/100✅✅♥️♥️♥️♥️
spoiler free review.ngl i kinda ramble a bitokay, I'm about halfway through at the time of writing this (113 chapters), so i think i can give a well-informed review. Im not a critic, so I'm not gonna write like one. I'll just put down my opinions. The concept alone is very original, and the initial world building is super solid. (If a little quick in the first chapter) The MC is relateble and understandable. he's also my favorite type of MC that isn't really the HERO type but only looks out for himself and those close to him but also isn't heartless. (also known as the Bai Zemin build) his specific overpowered gimmick is also not over the top, and he uses it well for the ost of the time. had a moment in the 100s that seems a little questionable) ge can use any ultimate limitlessly but not EVERY ultimate. so, not as OP as it could be. there's lolis, that's always a plus. The MC wears a mask in the game, but we never get a description for the mask, and that's literally my biggest problem with the whole book. is it a surgical mask? a domino mask? a cowl? is it like an oni mask? or something closer to the anbu from Naruto? he got a helmet at somepoint how the heck is that gonna work. descriptors is another issue i have (aside from how pretty the girl are) we don't really get descriptions for people outside of when they are first introduced so its easy to forget what the characters are supposed to look like. and the same thing with skills but to a lesser extent. YOU WILL forget what some of them do. to not go out on a negative note, the MC also isn't the type to keep a low profile to avoid trouble and doesn't hide his name. definitely not the "mystery expert that no one knows about" type. such face slapping, much humiliation
Love this book the characters are amazing and the story is really good so far in chapter 21