Hi there, Author-Nim.After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review. Here I explain why.1) Writing QualityThis book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.2) Story DevelopmentThe pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.3) Character DesignThe character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.4) Updating StabilityIt's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.5) World BackgroundKinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.I hope you do better next time.- Eien Warui.
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Great book with very well developed characters and plot which a clear path and goal for all character to work towards. Overall a very good read, thanks author.
The story seems really good! I haven't caught up yet but so far it's really interesting. I'm glad the translation is good, and the story development is amazing as well!
i love the way you wrote this story.it makes me want to keep on reading on and on . keep it up,this dook is a dimond.there is a lot more i want to say but im not good at describing what i think.
This book is a masterpiece, I recommend you to read this book NOW.
why this book is not popular, this book should appear in the main page, this thing is really making me angry.
This is a fantastic novel and should be released !!,!,!,!,,,,!!,!,!,!,,!,,!!,!,!,!,!,!!,,!,,,,!,!,!,,,,,!,!,!,!,!,!,,,,,,!,!,,!,,,!,!,,,,!,!,!,!,!,
https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............
If you like LitRPG stories this one is very good. Very Humorous. The details and language require some gaming background to understand though. Even with extensive military and gaming background I feel like the an acronyms get confusing. I'm going to need to reread the chapters that define them before continuing now that I've caught up. (4/20/2020)
I love this book so far. I hope they both get together soon ? author you are doing really nice this book is amazing ❤️ i will wait for the next chapter ?
Interesting premise, but the execution... It's just... Unsatisfactory. Every chapter the stats names change, the numbers change without any reason. The protagonist is supposed to be a crazy bastard, but except for the first chapters, he acts like a normal game reincarnator main character (except some few moments). Not only that, but he act like some degenerate version of the others mcs of the genre, because is more dumb than they and has much less charisma on him. That novel just isn't for me, even though I like the genre.
Please more.Another great chapter.Story looks good.Cant wait to read more.Please more.Another great chapter.Story looks good.Cant wait to read more.